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person Trollmia
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so totally worth waiting for. Very good... *panting here* I sure hope you have more this planned for the future...
*thumbs up baby and I'll change my panties*
person Arryelle
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome and well worth the wait. You write lemons so well there great. I'm sooo hot and bothered now must go seek release from my boyfriend now lolI hope all your lemons are that great and the dialogue was great it was funny and a libido awaker. Please update soon hehehe can't waiy WOW just WOW!

Loves Arry
person Mija
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok ok first of all I soooooooooo love this chapter, I was like YESSSSSSSSS a new chappie!!!!...and what can I say, it made me goo awwwwwwwwww and sniffle with such love, ah the romance, the horniness, the beauty of it all, love the whole hospital scene, well the recovery part where naru baby was holding Sasu babys hand and then when Sasuke woke up and got all confussed and one of the things that came to his mind was wow naruto looks good..hehe you just gotta love that, ok now lemme just say the whole confession scene felt a tad rushed, but heck I am a loving it, and I loved the chapter very very much, I always trip on the way some people say some fics are a bit OOC, I mean isnt the fact that naru and Sasu loving each other and having hot boy smex a bit out of charactor of the way the true creator has it? unless he/she has something planned for us at the end of the show, now wouldnt that just be sooooooo wonderfull??? *goes all big eyed and stars appear before them with hope* lol, anyhow if Sasuke loved naruto I would hope he would tell him and vise versa, and how can it really be ooc since naruto has wanted him for how long now?? looks like Sasuke was the dead last for not catching on sooner, even Kakashi knew lmaoooo too funny, cant wait for the sex to come, ooh I like sex scenes but i love them when there is a plot too, so I am soo loving this ficcie, I thank you soo much for the update hope to read more soon...please hope to read more soon..ifn I give ya big puppy dog eyes with sparkles all around them will it help ya to write another soon? ok ok I will be good and try not to scare the autheress of this fic...*slaps my hand but looks at ya in hopes puppy eyes might of worked* hehe..anyhow enough of my babbling, must have more but I can be patient I know how it can get when real life get in the way sometimes, boy do I, reminds me still have lots of my own unfinished works..*smacks myself for being a bad autheress* ty ty ty for the wonderful read, till next time, be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Nathaniel
schedule April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey :-)

A great reunification chapter! Little angst (you may remember my aversion to overflowing angst), some romantic and some lime. Sometimes Naruto and Sasuke seemed really gooey but I think that's what meeting your seemingly lost and unrequited love after such a prolonged time span makes you. Well done, California girl ;-) You are right about the real Itachi - who knows what his real purposes are? Kishimoto perhaps, but sometimes I suspect his manga is WIP (work in progress) and he doesn't have a roadmap for his story and characters :D

Oh and that thing with aff.net. I know they are restructuring their data base and that they are doing this for the authors and for us fans. But it was enervating and sometimes just a little bit complaining without malice makes me feel better :-)

Congrats on your A exam and enjoy your holidays (if there are some at the moment :D),
Nathaniel
person Bookworm51485
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Today is such a good day. My classes are all over, two of my favorite stories right now were updated today (yours in one of them in case you didn't realize) and I got home before dark for once. I liked the chapter, even with the absense of Gaara. I liked the SasuNaru interaction, very sweet. Some authors write moments like this and it's just raunchy and cheap but you did good. Now I just can't wait for your next chapter, I wanna see Gaara. I like your portrayal of him, so many people just slaughter his character and it's nice to see him not portrayed as a freaky weirdo who's a little slow. Wow....I'm uninspired today review-wise. So I guess I'll just end with I really liked the new chapter and I can't wait for your next update....with Gaara.....cause he's just SO CUTE!!!!
person NaturalHerb
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i'll come find u in your sleep and hypnotize u into finishing it (with a rubber chicken even) if i have to. ::ends rant:: seriously, this has to be one of the best naruto fics i've ever read, and i've read and reviewed my fair share. pretty please continue it, but don't rush into it. I'd personally rather have to hunt u down than read a lemon ;-) (any and all death threats are to be taken in a highly comical manner, no actual harm will come from them...unless...)
person Joukami
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lemon you say?*grins evily* i hope you do..... i love your fic
person Arryelle
schedule April 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic I hope you update soon. I like Garaa and sakura together but I hope in your next fic you could consider Itachi/Sakura since in this fic he clearly doesn't want to hurt her and admires her strength. they really are a cute couple and I think you could pull it off

Arry
person Mija
schedule April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omggggggggg you have got to update soooooooon please?? pretty please?? ooh the angst, and the emotion, the love, I soooooo love it, Gaara and Sakura??? never thought of it but sounds good, and awwwww of course you have my two most favorite pairings in here Sasu/Naru and Kaka/Iru oh the love, soo loving this please please please update please???? *goes to corner to grovel more* ty for the awsome read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person raven-chan
schedule April 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it.... soooo cute... back together again! Hope to see more soon!