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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^
Love it. There isn't enough KakashiItachi out there.
A great fic, normally I'm not a huge angst fan, but that was just brilliant.
Love it. There isn't enough KakashiItachi out there.
A great fic, normally I'm not a huge angst fan, but that was just brilliant.
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was quite good. I like the plot, it's very original.
I'd like to point out few mistakes though
Cage is a space surrounded on all sides by bars or wire, in which animals or birds are kept
I think that you ment cave instead?
and ebony is black, again, I think that you ment ivory which is white...
there were few spelling errors too, but they were mainly one letter mistakes, so they didn't make it difficult to read.
Otherwise, very good fic!
I'd like to point out few mistakes though
Cage is a space surrounded on all sides by bars or wire, in which animals or birds are kept
I think that you ment cave instead?
and ebony is black, again, I think that you ment ivory which is white...
there were few spelling errors too, but they were mainly one letter mistakes, so they didn't make it difficult to read.
Otherwise, very good fic!
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. ^-^ Kakashi/Itachi...Kakashi/Sas.... Ok Kakashi with just about anyone rocks. ^-^ I love Kakashi
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow I can HARDLY find any Kakaita ficcies ^^ you should definitely write more!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow wow wow! You HAVE to update this, its brilliant! The lines, the description, the plot...perfect, just perfect. That was one of the best yaoi scenes like..ever. Great job, please update!
-grace
-grace
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I liked this a lot. I don't think anyone is as cold as they make Itachi out to be in the manga/anime, and I love how you reconcile this as being a mask Itachi wears to protect himself and Sasuke, and how he feels so guilty about being a coward and not saying anything that he makes Sasuke hate him. I hope you write more!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I hope you keep going with this or write more of this pairing.
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June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Surprising and warm hearted and hot!!Loved the spanking,Kakashi seems himself,Itachi ,well I wish! he was this,maybe he will get Byugan(sp)...white eyes are related....
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May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. A great spin on Itachi's story.
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May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic was SO damn hot! But poor Itachi...when you described his blind eyes, I almost teared up! ^_^; This is a very good pairing! EM