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for Giving In

by shirokada

person Stagoya
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far, I'll be looking forward to another chaptre. ^^
person Demvaria
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*claps
person Kajia
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey I like the idea very much!!
I'd like to see how far they will go before falling into each other arms at the same time because they can't bear it any longer ^^
anyway your plot has my interest!
good continuation
person bb
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yooouuu are not stopping. People love your story and so do I. It's perfect! keep writing cause this story is going in my favorites!
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is cool...and so much fun
person xxdedxx
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo! You have to do more! I like it, i really do, Sasuke andNaruto are so cute together and i can just see the Uchihas eyes frozen on slivers of tanned skin Naruto sflashes him...-droolz-...umm...what was i saying?

Oh yeah! Please continue! I really like it =^.^=
person losthimagain
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ This sounds fun! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what Sasuke's going to do!
person ichi-kun
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love it, so far this is my favorite story on AFF. Please update soon ^__^
person Kira
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! Please continue it! I shall RR on every chapter that you make!!
person Kabato
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a good start
Keep writing it
later