rate_review Reviews

T-T Please don't discontinue it!

Dude, Don't freak, it was good.

ÒKAY OKYA*grIN!* I LOVE IT so far, dont screw it up. i say that they should both get drunk and ravage eachother and be like "no! this couldnt work, but i love you!" *SQUEEL* IM such a chick,
anyway its good so far keep it up.

Great start and I can't wait to see who's gonna admit there feelings first! <3 Please update soon!

i wll beta for you! i'm good at things like that.

the story is really god so far,sojust e-mail me if you want me to beta.

nalcanis@yahoo.com

You know, by the title I thought the story was going to be something weird, but I was kind of taken back when I read it because it wasn't as bad as some stories I've read. I'm not trying to insult other readers because I know they tried their best just like I know you also tried your best. I'm a novelist with many pen names and some of the stories I've wrting are very famous amoung young teenagers. Its the first time I've reviewed anyone's story and I feel like the way your story is going, you have talent as a writer. there are many people who do and they don't know it, so I'm trying to make sure you know it very well. And as many of your reviews said, "i hope u update soon."

Good-Luck

D.C.

u no if u wanna continue the story do so
but don't let the readers influence u
if u weren't gonna add another chapter then u
shouldn't have posted this in the first place.
but yes it's a great intro. to a seemingly smutt filled story
and i like it alot!!!
and yeah u do need a beta, e-mail me and i'll b glad
to b of assistance!!!

YAY i liked this story. its a great getaway from always reading too many naruxsasu sex stories as good as they are. update K. bai bai

not bad.i thought it was intriguing

oh no, DO continue ^^ Yes, you may want to get someone to Beta your work, but your story is still readable. If you decide to continue your fanfic, I won't mind being your beta. Unless, that is, you already have someone in mind?


Ria ^.~