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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww *wipes tears away* what a perfect ending to a great story!
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ That's really cute! Thank you!
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest, Naruto and Sasuke are really OOC in your story but I can't say that it really bothers me. This story was the fluffiest thing I've read in a long time and I simply loved it. The MPreg was an added bonus for me; I adore MPreg for some reason and loved that you put how the fox, who Naruto blames for being hated by the villagers, was the one who gave them another pinch of happiness. I loved this story, point blank.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO CUTE! i LOVE IT AND YOU GOT A GREAT GIFT! ^_~ KEEP WRITING
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Usually, I like to avoid one-shots becasue there's usually no plot or point, just like a drabble. But this one is really good! I liked how you wrapped it up nicely at the end. And even though I'm not really into first-person view-points, you pulled it off quite nicely. There was good flow to the story too. Good job!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was by far one of the best sasukexnaruto stories i have ever read!
it was soooo sweet!
i absolutely love it!
you are one hell of a writer....and this story totally kicks ass!
i hope you will write more just like it! ^.^
it was soooo sweet!
i absolutely love it!
you are one hell of a writer....and this story totally kicks ass!
i hope you will write more just like it! ^.^
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEE!!! So good! I want more!
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cried many times I mean many when I read this. I loved it
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I love this story!!! There seem to be an amazing amount of one-shot sasunaru's today, and this definately contends for first place!!! I can't say how much i love it enough! And, in my opinion, the characters were true to their personalities with just a touch of Au-ness (that i like to attribute to love). But they were great and the story was quite well written. And it was long, which is something i like. Write more cuz I'll definately read 'em! Props to you.
Kayo
Kayo