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This was a chapter? I've written short chapters in my life but none have been like this... Dude - either you work on your story-telling skills or you have been influenced by the underagers over at ff.net. Because this was not a chapter - this was more like a drabble. Get your gear in right position!

Sweet Jesus - the one who left the other review was nice - and believe me - I don't do Nice. This was horrible. This looked as if it was written by a 10 year old. And go by Occam's razor - if it looks like it - maybe it is so? Are you underager? Because it sure as hell looks like it. Remove this piece of shit before someone else do it for you.

looove it lol joke