mistakes and repairs
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Category:
Naruto › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,000
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
mistakes and repairs
disclaimer:I do not own the naruto characters kishimoto does
if i did oooh the fun
hehehe okay my very first first story
"speech"
'thought'
*kyubbi*
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chapter one
Naruto ran through the streets of konoha trying to get away from all the cold glares he had recieved earlier on in the day , he ran towards the training grounds " I will train and try to get a little bit back to normal." well naruto normal he thought as he began to throw shuriken and kunai at the markers his thoughts began to seep to the fore of his mind . 'No one really knows who I am they all think I am a clumsy fool, hmm maybe there right but they would never the coldness at night that seeps into bones till i can't even breath and sometimes just somtimes my mask slips just a bit'. "aaaagh I can't think those thoughts it is depressing " he picked up his shurken and ran back to his apartment.
The sun slowly slinked down in the sky soon revealing the stars Nsruto stared at the stars from his roof top ' I wonder do stars cry when the sune is up and become shiny becasue they are smiling threw tears like me ' naruto with his kyubbi powered hearing could hear a mother putting there kid to sleep and man joking with one another the village night had begun naruto sighed 'if only I could be with some on i cared for ..' a pain shot threw back making gasp with it "AAArgh" what was that .
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sorry but i haveto stop right here wat do u think
send me a review pls be slightly kind
if i did oooh the fun
hehehe okay my very first first story
"speech"
'thought'
*kyubbi*
____________________________________
chapter one
Naruto ran through the streets of konoha trying to get away from all the cold glares he had recieved earlier on in the day , he ran towards the training grounds " I will train and try to get a little bit back to normal." well naruto normal he thought as he began to throw shuriken and kunai at the markers his thoughts began to seep to the fore of his mind . 'No one really knows who I am they all think I am a clumsy fool, hmm maybe there right but they would never the coldness at night that seeps into bones till i can't even breath and sometimes just somtimes my mask slips just a bit'. "aaaagh I can't think those thoughts it is depressing " he picked up his shurken and ran back to his apartment.
The sun slowly slinked down in the sky soon revealing the stars Nsruto stared at the stars from his roof top ' I wonder do stars cry when the sune is up and become shiny becasue they are smiling threw tears like me ' naruto with his kyubbi powered hearing could hear a mother putting there kid to sleep and man joking with one another the village night had begun naruto sighed 'if only I could be with some on i cared for ..' a pain shot threw back making gasp with it "AAArgh" what was that .
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sorry but i haveto stop right here wat do u think
send me a review pls be slightly kind