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for Unfinished Business

by AkiraDawn

person Terri
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man now you've reminded me how much I want some chocolate chip cookies.I've been craving for some for the last two days and I'm going NUTS.Err wait I mean crazy.(sighs)
person Mina
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I lov your story
person windsoftiti
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay that was awesome. nice job.
person Moiraine
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, that is SOOOO sweet! I can't stand it! I loved it so much ,and it's not the end! Epilouge por favor? Oh, I love Pakkun!
person windsoftiti
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay nice job! mani hate the fact that this site deosnt show if the story is complete or not... errrr.... well nice job!
person Josh
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story and great follow up to the first one. I liked the way she finally let her guard down to be loved and what will happen next in this roller coaster fic of yours and hope to see an update soon....
person windsoftiti
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha pregnant Kurenhai is smart! Nice job!
person Sayomi XD
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww this is so sweet!
person windsoftiti
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow Kakashi really did miss a great chance... oh and nice chapter!
person james
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice