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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hope you make it more understanding. Hope to see you update it and make it a bit more interesting and clear for us to know what they are doing. Keep up the good writing
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shrug* pretty crappy for you citrus.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I did like it, I hope you either continue or do a sequel.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been reading Naruto fics for a long time because for me they have to be funny. You did that, the first chapter was some of the funniest fanfiction I have encountered. My only complaints are in the formatting, your paragraphs seem jumbled together, and that each chapter is short as hell. Keep up the good work.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a little weird. . . interesting i suppose in a way but weird
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I like it! You should keep going with this fic! It's pretty cute...
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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too quick, too easy, not sakura at all, i dunno.
good prank idea, but the line "i havent gotten a good lay in months" just isn't right. You make sakura out to be too much of a whore for it to be fun reading about it.
too quick, too easy, not sakura at all, i dunno.
good prank idea, but the line "i havent gotten a good lay in months" just isn't right. You make sakura out to be too much of a whore for it to be fun reading about it.
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update asap
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHA. short, sweet... absolutely cute.