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for Secret, Inevitable Love

by plizama

person avila7989
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER AWSEOM CHAPTER!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAA I CAINT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!
person deion
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person plizama
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to Thank Lemon Drops, for his review. :) Appreciate it, Thanks
person plizama
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'll send you what I have so far and you can perhaps help me put the finishing touches.
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll look for errors in the other chapters too! :) By the way, I'm a girl (so it was "her review"). I thought I gave of the giggling girl persona...I must not.
person plizama
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm sorry about that. My apologies, it was an excellent review though.
person Anon
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This story is truly touching and has made me laugh as well as cry. You are truly a great writer. Even though there is no smut in your story, well not much yet anyway. Your story is one of those few good quality fics that could do without smut and sex. That doesn't mean i wouldn't like to see some though *wink*. Although in my opinion I would rather it be kakairu, because naruto and sasuke are only like 10 years old (they can't even have sex yet). Well to make a long story short, UPDATE OR I WILL SAY NASTY THINGS BEHIND YOUR BACK! AND I CAN BE REALLY NASTY!
person plizama
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL. ok anon, I will have a chapter up just for you by tomorrow okay :). I wouldn't want to dissapoint you. There will be kakairu mostly, and narusasu later on when they get older. This story has more than 30 chaps, and on top of that it covers alot of years too. Don't worry it'll get better.
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Emailed you the chapter two corrections. If its all right I'll just communicate with you that way from now on. :)
person plizama
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank to Lemon Drops Chapters 1 and 2 aren't too shabby :) She is so awesome, my new hero!!!