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Ok I am now so into your story. It was so cute, sasuke and naruto forever woot woot!!!

AAAAHHH!!!!!! I think I'm addicted, so so adorable. Please PLEASEEEEEEEEE update soon.

Wow. I don't usually review or anything, but I like your story alot. So please write more when you can. Your reader Steve

love the story :3 update soon will you? :3

I really love your story, and I can't wait to read more, hope the next chapters soon. Will Naruto be a bit more mature and less dumb? Either way, I'll be here waiting.

Oh wow. I love the story line so far.^^ Can't wait to read more! ^o^

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!update soon please!!!!!!!!!^-^

This story sounds pretty good, hope you update soon.

I like your beginning. I've only seen a few stories with Kakashi raising Naruto and I've loved the well-written ones. It's sweet. I have a question though, is there no kyuubi in this story? And I mean not only sealed within Naruto but in connection to Konoha at all. Does that make sense? Sometimes I just can't say what I mean to in a few words. I'm wondering if Kyuubi isn't sealed in Naruto, is he sealed in one of the other kids? And if kyuubi doesn't exist in the story at all, does that mean that Yondaime is still alive? I don't figure there is, but I figure I should ask anyways.

I have to say my personal preference would be if Kyuubi isn't sealed in Naruto then he just not exist within the story (I read one story where Kyuubi was sealed in Sakura. Ugh, that just bothered me so much. I didn't like that female being put in such a position of pity. If it's not obvious I can't stand her. Oh well moving on), but it's your choice. I just like reading stories with Kakashi and little Naruto, so I'd probably read it anyways even if you chose to put Kyuubi in Sakura *cringe* because I really do like your beginning so far and the focus wouldn't be on her. Wow, I'm rambling now so I'm going to try to wrap this up. One thing that did bother me is the formatting. At points there are just big chunks of writing, it would be easier to read if it was more spaced out on the page.

Actually I do have one more question, why would the people invading come ask Naruto's mother where the Hero Water was and on top of that, when she says she doesn't know give up? I get the impression that they're outcasts in the village so I don't understand why he'd come to her for answers instead of looking for a village leader. And also the transition from him questioning her to molesting her is a bit quick.

I'm feeling a bit wary about leaving this bit of con. crit. (I just had a bit of an incident with an author and her reviewers over some con.crit. I left for her that involved me getting nasty emails) but I decided to go ahead and leave it anyways and I'm hoping that you take it the way it's intended.