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for Better Left Untold

by SethLovesMe

person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw...cute...wtf is going on?
person RyukoFaeris
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yanno, of all things I would've thought Sasuke would be a cat. But then, I would imagine Naruto would like dogs more. Although dogs and foxes don't get along well, right? In which case, a cat would have been better. Either way, it's your fic. ^^
Question: Why would Naruto put on black eyeliner?
XD And, of course, it would only make sense that Sasuke-puppy would be named Kurai.
person tortilla lady
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!! sasuke in puppy form & a very hot smexy sounding naruto!!!!!! (converse & eyeliner *drool*) please update soon, soon, soon!!!!! i can't wait!!! cute chibi puppy sasuke *squeeze*
person galeaya
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is so cool! you just have to finish this story... oooooh, can't wait for the update! -giggle- keep it up~
person Draconayzia
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, little puppy Sasuke gnawing on Naruto's fingers. Somehow I find that completely believable.

Good work so far. I look forward to the next chapter.
person DrakenD4
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! that was sooo GOOD, please continue.
person inuki
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is Cute....i like the idea of the story
please update soon..
i'll be waiting

^_^
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooooo love what you've done to naruto. Lol. huh...... I'v also love the fact that you've changed naruto's life style, living conditions, and personality to 1 that, in my opinion better suites him. you know he seems more intelligent, mysterious, and well just plain DAMN HOT!!!!!!!!(sweating, fanning self off!) Lol. well I gess you can say you changed everything we've learned about naruto. And for the better, well to me at least! And trust me that’s hard to do. So well great job. Anyway cant wait for your update. so update soon ok cause I want to read it. well till then. see ya later. ^_^