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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it. Weird...but I did. And I'm glad you gave them a chance to interact and sick as it is, their relationship is oddly....beautiful. Wow...^_^ but I did like it
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July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Figured I'd review this one again. Because I love it so much. You write this pairing so well! I wish this one-shot was longer. I hope you decide to write a longer story with oro/jir in the future!
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I never really considered anything going on between those two, I guess it just never occurred to me. I think you got Jiraya's POV perfectly for that situation-- I really felt sorry for him.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jiraiya needs to give some serious payback. Ever think about writing a sequel to this where the roles are reversed? Or where Jiraiya has the uperhand? I can't see Jiraiya raping someone even if he wanted revenge. Revenge with toys since he is a pervert. Or something.I guess you can say that I liked your story since I am asking if you thought to write a continuation of it. Do you have more stories posted somewhere else with this pairing? I need to go back to your Author Page and look now.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this on FF, I think. I love it. This is my favorite pairing, but so few people write on them.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. Yeah, they both really looks like Sasuke and Naruto, huh? With the whole defection and love-hate relationship thing. Actually, this is the first time I EVER read OroJira. Well, I can't say that I regret it. I'm actually kind of liking it.
Good luck with that fic you're talking about!! ^_^
Good luck with that fic you're talking about!! ^_^
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story!... Very well writen I love this pairing and most of all with Jiraiya the one playing bottom. It just makes more sense because yeah he is bigger in body mass then orochimaru but personality wise orochimaru though the smaller one is more obsessive, evil and crazy... really he is a homicidal maniac. And because his personality is this it makes him a hard person to write as a bottom with out going OOC. So I love your story! ^^ write more please.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing. Its so hard to find. Can you write another story with Orochimaru as uke? I love how you wrote Jiraiya's pov. The whole hate and love thing was very well done.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A rare pairing but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very good. I would love to read more!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jiraiya...I shall cry for him. It was well written, I did feel really bad for Jiraiya because he did have genuine feelings at one time for his old friend. Its hard to give up on those and you portrayed that well.