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February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is 4 years after your last review for this story but I wanted to let you know that I've enjoyed your stories so far. I gravitated from the ShikaNeji stories (especially Worth The Trouble) but this story intrigued me as well. I hope that you didn't give up from the rude reviews you've received. (I agree with Crimson Embrace's point - the stories are free, why criticize if you can still find the cookie-cutter fics you want elsewhere.) my hope is that you continue someday, but I will understand if you are just too busy to write or lost interest in the Naruto fandom. (or perhaps you are regular on ygal or another source?) I just wanted to say your work is appreciated and that we miss you!
Btw if you get this same review 3 times, please excuse it. AFF and my itouch were having issues
Btw if you get this same review 3 times, please excuse it. AFF and my itouch were having issues
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
This Is ... Different.
A Very Unique Blend.
Let's See Who,Actually,MAKES Her List.
Shika Would Be Awesome.It'll Be Utterly Surprising If It's Lee! =D
But...Shikamaru...*Sigh*
Also,You Have A Nice Writing Style.
Update Soon! ^_^
This Is ... Different.
A Very Unique Blend.
Let's See Who,Actually,MAKES Her List.
Shika Would Be Awesome.It'll Be Utterly Surprising If It's Lee! =D
But...Shikamaru...*Sigh*
Also,You Have A Nice Writing Style.
Update Soon! ^_^
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until you update. I wonder who will be next.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this concept! I’m a big fan of sexual exploration… no such thing as a slut or whore, they are just girls who like sex and do it often just like a boy… trying out everything/person that interests them, I see nothing wrong with that or anything ‘sexual’ as long as both/all people involved are consenting. Too bad you won’t continue, it would’ve been fun to read… I'm interested in if Hinate ever stops being a prude! I can understand you not wanting to continue after those rude flames, I can’t say I blame you.
CHAPTER 5: Awwww… Nartuto setting up a special seduction for Hinate’s first time… so sweet! I had to laugh at your warning at the top of Chap. 5… so sad to have to warn people! It’s funny anyone would think Hinata a slut, I think she’s a prude and can’t wait for her to loosen up! As for Naruto he’s every girls dream stud (not for a first because ouch 1st time sucks seriously), soft and gentle is seriously over rated… gentle is for romance… this is SEX, sex is for fun… besides he’s a teenager, still most gals would be thrilled for such a enthusiastic lover! He actually got her off first, wow… that’s something most guys can’t do once much less before they come! Seriously wow, she’s got nothing to complain about!
CHAPTER 7: Kiba and Shino together, perfect! Lucky girl, two hot men at the same time… that’s seriously hard to make happen, guys are so weird like that… too bad she didn’t take advantage of the opportunity… but then some girls really don’t like sex that much, it looks like she’s one of them… looking for love through sex… bad idea, rarely works... but definitely very in character for Hinata! If she was comfortable with her sexuality it wouldn't be in character for her.
CHAPTER 5: Awwww… Nartuto setting up a special seduction for Hinate’s first time… so sweet! I had to laugh at your warning at the top of Chap. 5… so sad to have to warn people! It’s funny anyone would think Hinata a slut, I think she’s a prude and can’t wait for her to loosen up! As for Naruto he’s every girls dream stud (not for a first because ouch 1st time sucks seriously), soft and gentle is seriously over rated… gentle is for romance… this is SEX, sex is for fun… besides he’s a teenager, still most gals would be thrilled for such a enthusiastic lover! He actually got her off first, wow… that’s something most guys can’t do once much less before they come! Seriously wow, she’s got nothing to complain about!
CHAPTER 7: Kiba and Shino together, perfect! Lucky girl, two hot men at the same time… that’s seriously hard to make happen, guys are so weird like that… too bad she didn’t take advantage of the opportunity… but then some girls really don’t like sex that much, it looks like she’s one of them… looking for love through sex… bad idea, rarely works... but definitely very in character for Hinata! If she was comfortable with her sexuality it wouldn't be in character for her.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! Some of these people reviewing are brutal! People these are stories that are written for free for your enjoyment, not liking the story... don't read it.
Hestia,
Your writing is beautiful and I would like to read any type of pairing you'd like to write... Het, F/F, M/M, Shouta, Beastiality, urine play, feces play, anything... no holds bared. While some types don't normally appeal to me I would love to read them simply because you write so well and it's facinating to see how you handle them.
Don't let a few bad apples drive you away from Het! This site is for ALL forms of 'love' including some that maybe disturbing/distasteful for some readers... that's why there is ratings and warnings! People don't have to read those stories if they don't like the types of pairings! Gentle 'I wishes' or 'Aw, I wish nots' are one thing... slamming someone is another. All those who flame should look at thier own writing... if they even have any, and ask themselves if they were being fair, how they would feel if they were the ones being slammed.
Sorry, you can remove this review after you've read it... if you even dare to read reviews from this story, I hope you do. I was just so very angry when I read some of these comments and don't want you to suppress your writing or feel you have to tailor it to 'fit' what people say they want. Tackle it all, it's fun!
Hestia,
Your writing is beautiful and I would like to read any type of pairing you'd like to write... Het, F/F, M/M, Shouta, Beastiality, urine play, feces play, anything... no holds bared. While some types don't normally appeal to me I would love to read them simply because you write so well and it's facinating to see how you handle them.
Don't let a few bad apples drive you away from Het! This site is for ALL forms of 'love' including some that maybe disturbing/distasteful for some readers... that's why there is ratings and warnings! People don't have to read those stories if they don't like the types of pairings! Gentle 'I wishes' or 'Aw, I wish nots' are one thing... slamming someone is another. All those who flame should look at thier own writing... if they even have any, and ask themselves if they were being fair, how they would feel if they were the ones being slammed.
Sorry, you can remove this review after you've read it... if you even dare to read reviews from this story, I hope you do. I was just so very angry when I read some of these comments and don't want you to suppress your writing or feel you have to tailor it to 'fit' what people say they want. Tackle it all, it's fun!
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, please don't give up on it! :)
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"But it sort of made sense—Shino the virgin and Kiba the whore—both looking for what they couldn’t find in women—looking for each other."
^This is the best line ever.^
I really like this story. Hinata's horrifed embarrassment at awkward sex is just hilarious. ^^ Keep up the good work!
^This is the best line ever.^
I really like this story. Hinata's horrifed embarrassment at awkward sex is just hilarious. ^^ Keep up the good work!
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor hinata.....still looking for 'the one' huh?? kiba & shino?? wow....never thought of that.....i wonder who will be next?? or when will it be neji's turn?? hahahahaa....nice one.....
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. this story actually has depth. i loved the part where hinata runs over the names on the list. it's so...real! other stories are just boy decides he like this girl, girl gets with him, they have sex, blahblahblah...but this is different. i like it.
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far! Please consider finishing this after you are done with D/s naruto.