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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was then end? ;0; Noooo! Ack, I understand though. People can be so damn uptight about certain things and characters. I guess this is one of the reasons why there aren't so many Hinata lemons, people can jst be so anal. Of course, I am a hypocrit as well. Gah, I hope maybe you'll consider that oneshot idea. Of course, I'll understand if you prefer to keep Hinata a nun from now on. Gah, oh well at least you'll still be writing TP. Thanks for the story you have given us so far.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, if I wasn't already teetering on the edge of losing interest in this, I've certainly gone over it now. Sorry, like I said before you're a pretty good writer, but this just isn't my cup of tea. Good luck with it though.
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was lame. I was reading this thinking it was gonna be Naruhina, now I feel all disapointed...
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October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is all ooc... Sure he's dense but when it comes to people's feelings he usually has pretty good empathy. It was defniitley creepy... like someone was disguising themselves as Naruto and doing a distorted impression.
If you want to write Hinata with a bunch of different guys, why not just write oneshots? You can use the same set up as this one, but just say that each chapter is its own continuity. That way you can write variety but Hinata doensn't become an ooc slut.
If you want to write Hinata with a bunch of different guys, why not just write oneshots? You can use the same set up as this one, but just say that each chapter is its own continuity. That way you can write variety but Hinata doensn't become an ooc slut.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was beyond disturbing. It didn't sound like Naruto at all. Part of me hopes that this chapter was some sort of joke, but that seems unlikely. If you don't do something to fix this, I will have lost interest in this fic.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that actually would seem kind of realistic. Naruto could be very overly optimistic and the fact that he has unlimited Stamina could be simply too much for some. Any way, it was still kind of creepy but tingly. Wow, this was excellent.
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I was thinking "what the hell?" but then I figured it was the perfect out for her to go on through her list. And yes, I can actually see Naruto being so damn ADHD in bed, but being talented like he is at the same time. I am REALLY awaiting the Kiba chapter (because darn your foreshadowing, it sounds like he's gonna give her exactly what she wants).
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honestly i'm not horribly thrilled by the premise of this story. I can understand a person in hinata's position wnating to break free and experience all of life but what has been set up seems to be a pretty extreme path for her to decide upon.
however i have to grant you this, not matter how much i can see the merits and hinata and naruto as a couple (balance each other, etc...), its hard to aruge against your interpretation of naruto as a lover in this considering his upbringing
however i have to grant you this, not matter how much i can see the merits and hinata and naruto as a couple (balance each other, etc...), its hard to aruge against your interpretation of naruto as a lover in this considering his upbringing
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hadn't realized that you'd updated and got to read the last two chapters in a sitting. I was sad that Neji was such an ass, but you need a antagonist in a story like this...someone to get us pissed off. I love Naruto in this, he's just so darn cute with Hinata and smultry hot as a whole. I can't wait for your next update.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes! you must use gaara! I mean come on... if she truly wants to experiance everything before she gets tied down and married, she has GOT to be the one to sleep with Gaara. It would probably piss Neji off like you wouldn't believe *giggles*