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I love Hinata fics! There should be more out there!

And with that said...

Please hurry with the next chapter! Such a good start (though I think 30 names is pushing it for Hina, that's quite ambitious if you ask me), will be awaiting your updates

~Teaser

Whoa...it looks like Hinata's got her work cut out for her seducing wise. It is rather OOC but I actaully like this kind of OOC-ness since Hianta needs more lemon lovin! Great start and please update soon kay? ^ ^

A fascinating concept, but can you pull it off?

I like this beginning. I hope in the end Hinata doesn't end forced to marry by her clan.

If you took off Neji because it was gross, couldn't you take off Gai too? It's even more gross! Couldn't you replace him by the cool Genma?

I like the start to the story, but I am a little worried...

I have nothing against Kiba, but I just can't see hinata ever going beyond friendship with him. Add to the fact that Kiba makes me think of a bang and go type of person, just looking for a good lay, I always tend to avoid any Kiba Hinata pairings. Sadly there are too many of those here... I would prefer seeing Hinata with someone like Shino or Lee before I saw her with Kiba, that is just how much is disgusts me, since they seem more her type or person.

I would actually like to see this go Naru/Hina, as there are a shortage of here on this site, and few if any completed ones. Hope you didn't mind the mild rant, but This place has way too many Yaoi, naru/sasu, or some other crazy pairing to make me venture too deep into the archives.

I really like this fic from you. It is definitely one of your best and its only one chapter so far. I can't wait for the update. But did you have to leave it hanging, without letting us know who made the final cut. You and your affinity for cliffhangers, argh. I just hope that your chapters come out as fast for this fic as they have for your others. :) I love Hinata, and how you portray her in the story. I'm dying to know if she gets Naruto or starts with Kiba (he better stay on the list...darn it).

Ok...so you took Neji out...but you left Gai on? What about Gaara!!! Gaara needs more love people! Give our Smexykage a chance!

Something I forgot, but it would be VERY funny to see, and has to do with my hatred of the dreaded Kiba/Hina pairing (why people like this I will never know).

Since you seem to have Kiba sleeping around with all sorts of girls, and Shizune would be able to pull up any medical files, what would happen if Kiba was shown to have a history of STDs..

But yeah yeah, it seems like I might be the minority here. Heres hoping this will be one of the few naru/hina stories on this site.

I really like what you have written so far. You really seem to have captured Hinata's character to a T. I can't wait til the next chapter. Good job.

Hmm, this looks interesting.Just one thing, warn me when the Neji/Hina chapter comes up, if it does. The pairing kind of squicks me. So if you could just put in a little warning in the chapter, I can avoid it and read all the other well written smut. Keke, you're an excellent sensual writer, you really know how to write erotica in a language that is realistic but not to crass or cliched. That's why I like The Traveling Pussy, and that's why I'm certain I will like this as well.
Oh, oh, is this the one that will include the Hina/Sai?
Just curious, you mentioned it one in TP and I've been very eager ever since to see one (it's jsut a very rare pairing).