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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can you update please
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story but you need to clean it up a bit.. When he is talking to himself, and when he is coming home you need to be a bit more precise on everything and what's going on in the Hokage's office when they entered
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one note- Are you trying to say Tsunade refers to naruto as a little brother? Because that would be "otouto-kun" "onii" is used for older brothers. Unless you meant to say "oni" (ogre) in which case it's just one i. :)
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg more of this...I love when jiya-sama pervertion comes true!!!! ^_^
still it's funny so far and I hope it has many random pairings...instead of the common "kakashi team orgy one" I want to see more sand village peeps and gai's team! ARG..dunno why people hate these groups! Even kurenai's team would be funny
sorry ranting again...anyway..keep up the good work.
I'm too lazy to sign in XD
still it's funny so far and I hope it has many random pairings...instead of the common "kakashi team orgy one" I want to see more sand village peeps and gai's team! ARG..dunno why people hate these groups! Even kurenai's team would be funny
sorry ranting again...anyway..keep up the good work.
I'm too lazy to sign in XD
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see where this is going. Update soon!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic! more! Keep writing and update soon!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I dont know where this is goign but its really damn interesting. Lets see about it.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I wonder if anybody will recognize him from the movies?
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats a really interesting plot. Maybe you could be more vivid w/ the sex scenes, and the time line was a tad difficult to follow, but other than that, 2 and a half thumbs up/
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some how I can actually see Jiraiya doing that to Naruto. Now will any of his friends recognize him, or more importantly, the HIM that was in the movie...
*wonders when Anko will jump Naruto, as well as Kurenai, and just about all other female friends he had*
*wonders when Anko will jump Naruto, as well as Kurenai, and just about all other female friends he had*