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by koea

schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic by accident and I have one word to describe it...

KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person despairs
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw such a sweet story. Gaara finally found somebody to love him *grins*
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, but was sad that it was done so soon! I wish you would have dragged it out a little longer but it was really good! You should definately write more!
person protogirl
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY GOT TO THIS PART ><

anyway it's interesting so far...love your SEME!Gaara because it's rare and uncommon ^^ also like your style of writing; I would love to beta your stuff when I get my own pc

wouldn't mind seeing a gaalee with gaara in konoha for some weird reason and in...women's clothing XD or something just silly!!! (*gets motivation*)

......what?

too lazy to sign in XD
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a good ending...and a story that was well worth the time that I spent reading it. I thank you for writing such a beautiful story and a happy ending (thanks for the Sakura bit too).
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Gai sensei, GO LEE!
person Trollmia
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, it's so cute... And the act between Gai and Lee are just - *laughs a bit* - yeah I can really see this happening... Thumbs up!!
person Shinigami24
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinks eyes* Marriage isn't evil! It fact it's rather sweet! As for Sakura-I think Lee's too good for her! She doesn't deserve Lee and Naruto! I like her in the 2rd arc better! Since she grew up! Hopefully Naruto gets over his stupid crush on Sakura and finds someone else! The fact Sakura was willing to leave leaf for a traitor like Sasuke-it pisses me off! I already disliked Sakura, until I found out about the Sakura and Sasuke scene leading up to Sasuke's leaving on wikipedia-right then I lost all respect I had for her! I will never understand why the baka villagers value their Uchiha so much, when Kiba and the others nearly got killed going after Sasuke in the first place! Sasuke tried to kill Naruto! Granted Sasuke might be messed up from Itachi's betrayal, but he didn't have to follow Itachi's path! Doesn't the author realize that if Sasuke kill Itachi, he will have become the person he hates the most-Itachi! Gomen nasai for my rant, it's just that the Sasuke's leaving arc pisses me off royally...Kiba, Neji, Naruto, Shikamaru, Choji and Lee nearly died fighting the Sound Five. Gaara, Temari and Kankuro barely got to them in time...Lee was still recovering from his surgery, and had NO business being there in the 1st place! Kiba, Lee and Naruto are some of my top 10 favorite characters! And i have to wonder exactly why Ino and Tenten were left out! They are capable fighters! And the boys could have used the extra help...
person Hasu
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 is aiii! Kawaii! Say yes damnit Lee!
I can't wait for the next one! *bounces on the spot excitably*
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww and a half! That was so cute. Lee better say yes, darn it he better say yes! (Well unless you have some good drama planned, but he better eventually say yes!) Hee-hee. Really nice chapter, it was very well thought out (though just to let you know, when you go to revamp, edit, and check for errors...start with this one). Thanks for agreeing to be nicer to Sakura (I thank you for it, truly I do).

I check this story everyday, so I thank you PROFUSELY for updating so often. It is a wonderful present every time there is a new chapter.