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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update update update!!! I want to read more! Everytime I see that you've updated I sqeal read then want to read more!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! It was so cute, and beautiful. Your making me all jumpy, and I can't wait to find out whats going ot happen next so I'm hoping your really going to update ASAP. I think thats how you spell it. lol. HURRY PLEASE!
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay more please!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello! *waves* HUGE GaaLee fan here.
I'd like to thank you for sharing this fic...I like it very much...I'll try to show it to other fans...I don't think many people are seeing it yet. ^^
Only one thing struck my attention about the story...Lee has those heavy weights on his leg, so unless he somehow had them off, I don't think Gaara would be able to pick him up (much less say that he's light) ^^ There were also a few errors...I'll help you correct them if you want ^^
I'd like to thank you for sharing this fic...I like it very much...I'll try to show it to other fans...I don't think many people are seeing it yet. ^^
Only one thing struck my attention about the story...Lee has those heavy weights on his leg, so unless he somehow had them off, I don't think Gaara would be able to pick him up (much less say that he's light) ^^ There were also a few errors...I'll help you correct them if you want ^^
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh I forgot about his weights! *Slaps head* But I would think Gaara’s sand would be strong enough to pick him up regardless of the weights or not. He did stop Deedara’s huge bird that was about to fall on the sand village with his sand and I would think that would be heavier then Lee even with the weights on. As for the errors I find that all fanfics have grammar mistakes in them I thank you for your generous offer but I think that fixing the mistakes myself (when I finally get around to it)
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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will help me be a better writer. But seriously thank you for the offer (I wish people would offer that kind of help with my assignments! *sweat drop*) Also I really appreciate you wanting my fic to be spread around more =^^= It means a lot to me that you are enjoying it! Thank you for your review and feedback! Its helps me improve my writing! GAALEE 4 EVER!!!! =^^=
Koea
will help me be a better writer. But seriously thank you for the offer (I wish people would offer that kind of help with my assignments! *sweat drop*) Also I really appreciate you wanting my fic to be spread around more =^^= It means a lot to me that you are enjoying it! Thank you for your review and feedback! Its helps me improve my writing! GAALEE 4 EVER!!!! =^^=
Koea
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished tha last chapter...I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After the festival...evil plan of Gaara's...oh dear. Hee-hee. Well, I'm really liking the interaction between everyone and the couple, its cute and interesting. Glad that you updated again, and can't wait to see what is in your evil little trick of bags.
Oh, the only thing that I have to say that I didn't like is how you keep criminalizing Sakura...she didn't like Lee in the manga or anime (in fact she tries to run from the creepiness of his affections) so I don't think its necessary to have her be hanging on Lee or trying to flirt...its just not Sakura at all (and you are writing everyone else so well). I know that you are probably a member of the Sakura-haters club, but could you possibly lay off of the Sakura OCC for me? Thanks. Its the only thing that makes me growl at when I read your stories. You can just leave her out if its too difficult to write her being anything but annoying, I wouldn't mind that at all. Send the pink-haired princess on a mission for all I care. (Sorry about the paragraph of bitching...I do love your story a lot).
Oh, the only thing that I have to say that I didn't like is how you keep criminalizing Sakura...she didn't like Lee in the manga or anime (in fact she tries to run from the creepiness of his affections) so I don't think its necessary to have her be hanging on Lee or trying to flirt...its just not Sakura at all (and you are writing everyone else so well). I know that you are probably a member of the Sakura-haters club, but could you possibly lay off of the Sakura OCC for me? Thanks. Its the only thing that makes me growl at when I read your stories. You can just leave her out if its too difficult to write her being anything but annoying, I wouldn't mind that at all. Send the pink-haired princess on a mission for all I care. (Sorry about the paragraph of bitching...I do love your story a lot).
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good update, I enjoyed it a lot. Please update again soon.
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lemon drops,
I actually have been thinking that perhaps I have been too hard on Sakura. Heh I don’t really ‘hate’ her but your right I’m not going to bag on her any more, it is an OOC. Thank you for your wonderful reviews I really appreciate constructive criticism (as odd as that sounds heh) Thanks again!
Koea =^^=
I actually have been thinking that perhaps I have been too hard on Sakura. Heh I don’t really ‘hate’ her but your right I’m not going to bag on her any more, it is an OOC. Thank you for your wonderful reviews I really appreciate constructive criticism (as odd as that sounds heh) Thanks again!
Koea =^^=