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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! update soon! LOVE GAARAxLEE!!!!!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*LOL* Priceless! Lee copying Hinata in the aftermath! *muses* Where's a video camera when I need one?
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee-hee...naughty Gaara. It was a good chapter. I love lemons, and this one was good. :) So thanks for the yummy Gaara/Lee action. I do think that I definitely read this story for the warm fuzzy feelings, so I hope that the next chapter returns to the cuteness that drew me to the story (not that I mind action...its just not the best part about this story). Thanks for updating again so soon, I always love reading this story.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet lemon, nicely done. So Lee finally figured it out. Now we'll have to see how their relationship develops from here. A note on spelling -- 'agenized' should be 'against'. Sorry, that was beginning to bother me. This a cute story. Thanks for the quick updates.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey now, I'm not a sicko! I think thats what you said in the beginning of the 7th chapter! I personally could of gone many more chapters with just cute little things thrown out there like a kiss on the cheek, or gentle touches....etc. But hey, this was really good. I mean....it was a bit fast though.... I know you were being pressured to hurry with the lemon and junk but I think it would of been better if gaara had just let lee know that he loved him by the kiss and then maybe they could of spent at least a little more time together before getting to the good stuff. But thats ok. It was still excellent, and i'm glad its not over yet! Well please update soon! Thankies! :D
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
two updates in one day, that makes YOU my hero. :) Hee-hee. I love your story, and think that Ten ten added a lot to this chapter, you write her well. I think its cute that she supports Lee and Gaara...maybe you could make a part with her and Gaara alone so they can become friends and Gaara can accept Lee's teammate. :) I think Gaara should try and make more friends in Konoha, even if it is difficult for him to do so. Maybe Ten ten can help Gaara prepare for his upcoming meeting with Gai...cause something tells me that might be a total blowout. I'm blathering on and on, and for that I do apologize. There is just so much that you can do with this story, and I'm really excited about it, especially when you update so often. :) Thanks again for the second update, you are awesome.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, did people really get offended over you calling us perverts? Lol, well I think that those people need to get a life. After all, by some people’s standards...no actually now that I think about it, a lot of people would consider this entire site (let alone this section) extremely perverted. If you aren't mature enough to take a simple joke, then you really aren't mature enough to even be on this site.
Aside from that though, I do think the story has been a little rushed so far. However if your goal is to focus more on Gaara’s and Lee’s relationship, as opposed to the building up to a relationship, then the pace is fine. I’m assuming that the chapters so far are more for setting the groundwork of the fic, as opposed to the “meat and potatoes” of the story. Regardless, I have enjoyed this fic and I intend to read the next chapter as well. Oh, and by the way, this pervert would like to thank you for chapter seven. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Anyway though, I would rather you spend your time writing the next chapter than read a review that’s gotten out of control. My best wishes for you and your writing.
Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You are a terrable person! I can't believe you did that... poor Lee-kun. And WOW do you ever update fast! Not that im complaning or anything... :$. So ya, can't wait to see what Lee des whith his new found knowledge! Please post soon! ^_^
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a bit of an evil cliffhanger...really...ACK! I love your story, I really hope that Lee kisses Gaara back. Really, truly hope that he does. I'm glad that you encorporated Naruto into the chapter, since he's the only one that seems to be able to get anything through to our favorite little red head. It was a very good chapter and I thank you again for updating so soon. I'm sorry to hear of your crappy day, but glad that we cheered you up. :) I hope today is better for you.