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for Hero

by koea

person BluishMooGoo
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute.
person Bitter_Blue
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this so much. XD
It's so cute! I love this pairing.

Keep writing! Please?
person AerieTigre
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee~ read it again.
person animekid
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahah love it so far! I won't mind seeing more naruto involvement in this relationship, since that is a rare concept ^_^

keep it up! You are doing a good job!
person stacy
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it!! love it!!
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I know that you just did this chapter, but more...please more. I love it so much so far. You make me want to write some Gaara/Lee...darn you. Really, this was so cute. My favorite part so far was when Gaara undid the bandage/binding on Lee's arm, that made me go "awwwwwww" a lot.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was awsome cant wait for number three
person AJAngelique
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomg!
please udpdate soon!
person animekid
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice beginning so far...read some of your other stuff and I must admit that I enjoy gaalee goodness ^_^

really good begining and almost perfect grammar! You did a good job betaing! Better than me >_<

keep it up! I wonder what gaara would do to lee while he is in his residence...? *evil laugh*
person NeoMT
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I finally got around to reviewing... since my network card went on the fritz. Anyway, you had some sentences that didn't make sense and confused some homophones, but that's just stuff that can be fixed any 'ol time. Gaara's slightly OOC (but then who's perfect at that?)-- being oppertunistic I guess and having rushed thoughts of what he wants...

...though I am guilty of that too, using it for humor though. ^__^; Overall, I guess I am going to have to keep reading since I am enjoying it.