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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So cute! And so well written.
This point of view made the story very interesting and refreshing. The lemon was satisfying yet peaceful and beautiful. I loved it.
This point of view made the story very interesting and refreshing. The lemon was satisfying yet peaceful and beautiful. I loved it.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ir was... I'm lacking of words to describe it, how it started angsty, but slowly turned into a sweet thing, and the way you wrote it from Kyubi's POV, and picture him as nice, not evil, it was awesome. I can't wait to read more of your works
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, what a sweet fic. I absolutely love Kyuu-kun in this fic. He is just so sweet with his concern for Naruto. You adress all the sad stuff in this, the isolation, the defeat, and the loneliness, well done. I also love the fact that Kyuubi is happy with Sasuke for making Naruto happy, and not just because Sasuke is strong and will be good protection and all that. Aww! (can't get over the aww, sorry)
Keep typin'
Keep typin'
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
From Kyubi's point of view, I thought that was cute!
- Sunset Serenity
- Sunset Serenity
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eh. That was kawaii....SEE!! Kyuubi isn't such a bad kitsune......he just...uh....acted bad....
Yes that'll do.
It was sweet. *huggles* Keep it up.
Yes that'll do.
It was sweet. *huggles* Keep it up.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome~! The third perspective is almost more intimate somehow. I loved it. Thanks!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me again, just read the first review and wanted to say that for me it read smoothly.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.^^ It was a bit hard to read tho. All the simple sentences kinda killed the mood a little, but I still liked it. :D