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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo... that is some twisted stuff. I LOVE IT!!!... I mean its just so poetic in a way. Sasuke doesn't deserve a happy ending after what he's done and the way that he found out was just so cruel. Oh man, twistedness at its best. The irony of being brought to the highest peak of happiness only to be torn down so cruelly, its just so evil and wonderful. No one else has ever done anything like this and I love it. Its well written even if there are some spelling errors, nothing that big. But its a great story. LOVE IT!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... another reason to hate awful lyrics put into a fic.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really didn't like this. I mean the fic itself is well written but the way that Sasuke found out was hurtful and wrong. I wouldn't fault him at all if he went into a murdering rage. I would have.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Holy fucking shit...
No one deserves THAT!!!!
No one deserves THAT!!!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good but it seem more like a nightmare that a history ..really... it is good but something make the fic sucks
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man that mean . i dont like sasuke but that is mean.it make me want to cry . i fell bad for sasuke. i get so use to sasuke and naruto you know. i just not right when they not together.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude…..one word…owchie… Heh but it was very well written in a harsh critical way. But it was still well written! =^^=
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate Sasuke, but this made me want to give him a big hug. Fucking Naruto, he doesn't have the right to cry like that with what he did in this story.
The parts that made me feel the worst for Sasuke were when he was thinking about how happy Naruto had been when he first came back, when Naruto wouldn't look him in the eyes when they made love, when Gaara was singing, and when he started throwing up.
The parts that made me feel the worst for Sasuke were when he was thinking about how happy Naruto had been when he first came back, when Naruto wouldn't look him in the eyes when they made love, when Gaara was singing, and when he started throwing up.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a mean fucking twisted one-shot. Heartless cunt.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I could really feel the emotions comin from the story. I liked it cause I like gaanaru. But that was mean even tho sasuke deserved it and, I didn't really like the lyrics to the song. No offense, it was still a good one-shot.