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*whines* i want more! this is great!

OMG!! cant believe you finished it there! ...but I cant wait for the lemon to come. PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

you *had* to stop writing there :( What a bad timing!!

I hope you'll write more! I like the Sasuke you described...a bit..animalistic..I love that ^.^'

This is hot. Love how they fight at the beginning, very realistic. Love how Sasuke seems almost psycho and how hot is it for him to speak so bluntly dirty. There's some things that are a little confusing in the story, though. I don't really get the pinot of their get together, exept introducing Sasuke's wanking sessions on Naruto. Or how they seems merely rivals in the first chapter to want to fuck, as in not a spure of the moment thing. And how Naruto seems to loose every confidence he had. But other than that, you seem to take it slowly, and I love slow lemons. I like what Sasuke's doing with Naruto's ass, it's hot. And I like the idea of Sasuke fucking Naruto into the wall fully clothed. Beds and nakeness are boring. I particulary hate it when they take off their pants but not their shirts. I think the first thing thay would take off would be their shirt. And I actually enjoy the mental image of Sasuke being shirtless with only hiw zipper open but still his pants on while Naruto only has his ass naked. Anyway, good job. Good luck for the next. ja ne!

OMG, i love it.
i want the lemons, please?
can't wait for the next. keep up your good work!

OMG, the hotness! I loved it when Naruto told Sasuke he wanted him to fuck him! Thats hot! I want the lemon! Post it! I think your story is funny by the way! Please update and post the lemon soon!

Heh, this rocks.

Damn you. Damn you. Damn you. Damn you. DAMN YOU!!!!!!! (crying)..............Man it was just getting good. DAMN YOU!!!!!!!! Man but It realy was a damn good story so far. But I must say, I thought sai would put up more of a fight for naruto.........huh........O well. Also you are great at explaining yourself with great detail. I mean It almost felt as if I was Thier. What I mean is I could Acolyte feel the emothins they felt..............very good. Not many people can do that. Anyway see you soon.......I hope.................And we were just getting to the good part. Damn it all. Damn It all to hell. Update....UPDATE SOON
Kisses ^_~

It was just getting to the good parts too!
I found it very entertaining and can't wait until the next installment comes out

*dreamy sighhhh~~~* Kyaaa... it's so hot... Naruto is so cute. *awes* I just wanna cuddle him ^^.

Update soon!