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by terranigma11

person seraphym
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what Naruto picked to do! And I love a good Sausnaru love fest! I understand that Naruto has to die at the end, but they're just starting to fall in love! Maybe he won't? Please?!?
person americanXminority
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
I know about the QL movie, but hadn't seen it either.
The idea's good, and you're workin' it ^_^.
Of course, Sasuke's TERRIBLY OOC, but I kept reading anyway.
I wouldn't mind reading even MORE, either.
Update?
person xxdedxx
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG i can't believe how badly i want to read more of this story! I want you to write it right now with me reading every words as it comes out. This chapter made me cry and giggle and get nice lil Sasunaru images in my head. I completely dig the story even though Sasuke is a little OC. But it's barely noticable in this creative little world you made. I REALLY REALLY look forward to more and an't wait to see how you shape this story :D

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person vixenia
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww i love this. its sad but i wanna read the ending. so please update soon k
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful begining. A little more detail would be nice though.
I LOVE the story line! I have been wondering when a fic like this would come along for Naruto! *Sqeeee* Hehe please update soon!

happy happy joy joy
person naru
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that is so cool
i limake more l oive it
i hope that sasuke will be narutos love one
^-^
person Wow
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
person chelzi
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh! looks goo~ood! i hope you update soon! i want to know what naru-chan wants to do! and he so obviously wants to fall for sasu! it'll be sad when he dies... ... ... ...please update soon! i'm excited to see what happens!!~
person hanyou-elf
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting premise and it's very well written. i can't wait to read the next part, i look forward to how they'll get together (they'll fall in love, ne?) and while it's looking to be set up as very sad and depressing, it's still looking very good.

great job! keep it up!
~hanyou-elf
person AnA La Pana83
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! I like the premise alot, more please! I can't get enough of NaruxSasu. I hope they get to see alot of beautiful places together. Tight work!