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for FreakShow!Naruto

by onesickmind

person DangoLover139
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have to write more. But make sure Naruto is the seme in any pairing.
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. But what's up with Sakura? Inner take over? Guess we'll see next chapter. Keep up the good work.
person COCO bean 1319
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far. Please continue writing many many many chapters. YOU ROCK MY FUCKING RAINBOW COLORED SOCKS!!!!! Oh remember sasUKE!!! *insert evil cackle* Ok seriously you need to continue this story because i'm already addicted. So write till your damn fingers fall off. Love You and your story.
-COCO bean 1319
person Horong
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAA!! SasuKaka, PWEASE??? Nice chapter! Please write this pair if you can, it's so cool but so rare!
person phorcys
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fckin awesome.
person ObsidianLace
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT! I thought it'd be way to wierd at first but I'm really glad I gave it a chance. I shall sit in front of my computer and glare at it till another chapter shows up.
person Mija
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm ok I havent read the fic yet, I am about to, but I was reading the info you had on the charactors, first off, is that how they are in YOUR fic are you basing them as they pertain to the anime?? like Hinata is not on Neji and Lee's team, that is TenTen, Hinata is on Kiba and Shino's team..Tsunade, Jiraiya and Orochimaru were not trained by Yondaime they were trained by the third, Kakashi and Obito were trained by the 4th, and ummm Neji is not Hinata's brother although she does call him brother, but he is actually her cousin from one of the branch families while while Hinata only has a younger sister and they are from the main family, Hinata's dad and Neji's were twins...ok just thought I would say that in case you did not know, but if you do but are just turning it around to fit the fic, which I have done many times, the I apologize and ask you to disregard this post k?? lol, now on to da fic, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Mija
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol and btw Yondaime was trained by Jiraiya lol, wonder sometimes if hes a pervert like Kakashi and Jiraiya lol, anyhow disregard this if you know all this already, was just hoping to be helpful if you did NOT know but if you do and are changing things around I am sorry for the silly posts, now on to da fic, huggles and smiles mija...:-)
person Mija
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok I just read it and it had me busting a gut here, Naruto is HAPPY Sasuke is a Vampire and Sasuke just wants to smack his biatch around and tell him to shut up lmaoo, and Kakashi is happy and wierded out at the same time lol, and omg the scene with Sakura was hilarious, she was gonna charge chicks money to sleep with Sasuke's dead body?? ok that is where the necro comes in?? or is Sakura a Necro in general with lots of other dead hotties? lol, anyhow I truelly like it, its wierd and funny and diffrent, cant wait to read more, and what does Kakashi have?? a big sucker as a mouth, is he the succubus??? and what exactly does he suck?? lol ok ok Im sorry for that one, will iruka be some freaky thing too??? and seriously you should make him a banshee..lol..they say when he screams he rattles the windows and scared the animals in the forest and puts his kids into a state of caught in the headlight sort of trance thingy, so affraid to move lol, or you could make Sakura and Ino or one of them a banshee since them screaming at people is a spooky thing to see but then again when Tsunade wants to yell or punch someone out shes pretty dang spooky too lol, ok ok..and how twisted do you want it to be?? I have a bit of some twisted sexual junk you could do if you want to add it or just hear it out, but its sort of gross so not sure, anyhow..ty for the read, cant wait to read more, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person DeadUchiha
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello lovely.

*aherm* I think that all of the Uchiha clan should be revived from the dead. *nod* *giggle* BRING BACK THOSE DEAD UCHIHAS! (Is the plural of Uchiha Uchihas? or is it Uchiha...idk...XP)

So when are you planning on having the next section done? There wasn't any rape or extreme violence yet!!! Bring on Kakashi! Bring on the freaky sex!! OH! And i want to see what you have planned between Itachi and Sasuke! Is Sasuke going to kill him now that he's a vampire?

And how come this isn't in the male/male section since Sasu/Naru is the main pairing?

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