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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is this story ever getting updated, it had the makings for a good tale, if u dont rush the naruto/hinata sex that is.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About time you updated... don't you think?!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the fic is a great start. I didnt pay anny atention to the lemon, i'm more interested in the storyline. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen when the two get closer to our Team 8 and Naruto. Hope the next chapter is up soon.
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty story I cann`t wait till you update this story well I just hope that you do update the story
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another update! Yay! I am liking were you are taking this story right now! I can't wait to see what those two are going to do to the gang. UPDATE! ^o^
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I like the story.. How it is being laid out. I hope to see your update soon.. I like how everyone is being portrayed to their character but the only thing that is a bit out of line would be.. Tsunade's and Naruto's relationship usually she would hit him in any other story but not in this one yet
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far, I really like it. I'm looking foward for a new chapter from you. ^-^
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damnit good stuff plz con just dun go 3rd person all da time n type longer, alot longer n ur golden