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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! Amazing! and heart-wrenching...
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was truly beautiful. The voice of your Itachi rings so true.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
waa! *cry* thats so sad! it was a great story but sad. and i love itachi so seeing him die is hard but i love that he opened up. and sasuke too. *still crying* good job. keep it up. waah!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neat story! Pretty touching, especially the final sentence. I loved it. (Although I didn't no smut this time XDD)
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's powerful. I really liked it :)
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hayayayii. intense!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awful! If someone was to die you SHOULD HAVE KILLED SASUKE!! who the hell kills off Itachi.....EVER?! I cant deny it though it was pretty... i sort of wish it was more than a one shot but i have learned to be happy with what i can get....
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was that sad story crack at the beginning about me!? (growls) and forces her Uke to give an apology!
Oh and by the way...you are NEVER allowed to tell me I write sad stories again...you heartless wench you!
That was so friggin depressing...Did you HAVE to kill ITACHI!? (cries) ...Well I guess if you were going
to do such a terribly horrible thing at least you made it believable...and ITachi was still a pretty big a
asshole till the very end, so kudos for that my mate! I loved it! The only problems in the entire thing that
I could see were where you didn't seperate paragraphs between Itachi's and Sasuke's dialouge...other than that
you did well with you mad betaing skills...you should do it more often!
Oh and by the way...you are NEVER allowed to tell me I write sad stories again...you heartless wench you!
That was so friggin depressing...Did you HAVE to kill ITACHI!? (cries) ...Well I guess if you were going
to do such a terribly horrible thing at least you made it believable...and ITachi was still a pretty big a
asshole till the very end, so kudos for that my mate! I loved it! The only problems in the entire thing that
I could see were where you didn't seperate paragraphs between Itachi's and Sasuke's dialouge...other than that
you did well with you mad betaing skills...you should do it more often!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was exquisite! I haven't read a one-shot like this in a long time. Well to be honest i haven't read a Itachi/Sasuke this good in a long time. And trust me, I look for them. I think you did well, and I also liked your Jiraiya/Orochimaru fic. They're both sad, maybe you should try happy endings? Anyways, this was good, it was cute, and it wasn't trying to completely give Itachi a huge explination to the way he thinks, or why he is. HE JUST IS. I loved it. Great job, I give you props
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Bob. That was good. So very good. Like, wow. I loved it. Muchly and thusly. Or something. I loved when Itachi told Sasuke that he loved him. Aaah. That was what I did. I yelled like that. Mentally, though. Oh wow. And then when they talked, and they were realizing that yeah, they still loved each other after all those years, and maybe their hate was love and...wow. This was really good. And at the end, too, when Sasuke finally killed him, I was just so...eeee. I loved it. I can't put into words my love for this. It was grand.
Much kudos to you, because this kicked some ass. I liked how they kind of sort of kissed, in a sweet brotherly way, and the way Itachi kissed the back of Sasuke's hand. That was so very beautiful, I thought. It makes me so happy and so sad at the same time. Was this a one-shot or are you going to continue it? Because, of course it's just as great as a one-shot, but if you could extend it to like, well, more chapters, then I would love you forever. Just because I was reading this, and I thought 'This has so much potential to be more.' So whether ot not this is continued, I don't care on that matter. Your story, your ideas, and I'll still adore it for weeks to come.
Ta
Much kudos to you, because this kicked some ass. I liked how they kind of sort of kissed, in a sweet brotherly way, and the way Itachi kissed the back of Sasuke's hand. That was so very beautiful, I thought. It makes me so happy and so sad at the same time. Was this a one-shot or are you going to continue it? Because, of course it's just as great as a one-shot, but if you could extend it to like, well, more chapters, then I would love you forever. Just because I was reading this, and I thought 'This has so much potential to be more.' So whether ot not this is continued, I don't care on that matter. Your story, your ideas, and I'll still adore it for weeks to come.
Ta