rate_review Reviews

for The Gods of War

by suzan

person Ukagau

schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait for another chapter!!! ^_^

person Lici

schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I really would like to read more on this.

Please update soon!

person Yuri

schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM

OMG, I LIKE IT. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT!!!

person Tara (Nurse Tenshi-Lee)

schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Ooooo!! I like the plot and the story so far, but there are a little grammar problems. It's not too bad but it's noticeable. Just thought you might want to find a beta. (Not suggesting myself by the way)

I have to ask, if you haven't already put it there, what is the main pairing?
I was thinking Ita/Naru...if slight and at the beginning. But I want to see Gaa/Naru too. Then eventually Sasu/Naru but before all that it should be Saku(or Ino)/Naru then maybe they get threatened by Sasuke or Gaara to leave Naruto alone. That would be kakoii!

Yeeeeaahh....anywayz, update soon! And don't forget about the beta!

person aria

schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM

it's very interesting!! i like it.
hope you update soon~

person billy

schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Great story so far. Please continue

person clair3

schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM

This is very interesting !!!!!!!!! keep it up!

arrow_back Back to Story home Back to Archive folder Back to Yaoi - Male/Male