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Excellent plotting. I look forward to finding out the exact hows and whys of the kidnapping.

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Jeez, how long are you gonna keep us on this cliffhanger missy??? Hmmmm???? Lol, anyway so we are progressing further. Kabuto? Or someone else is with Naruto...i'm so...confused lol. And honestly the kage's need to get the bugs out their asses. Haterz!

There's one little thing i noticed, a small grammar thing. You misspelled Konoha where it says, "Kakashi sent me to make sure neither of you die on the way back to Konoho,” The dog-nin replied gruffly, ect. ect. Thought i'd point it out. Anyway, do update soon k??

OMFG!!!!!!!!!! -arms flail about much like Saukra's did in the first test by Kakashi when he tricked her with a dieing sasuke-....-twitch twitch-...you? I...I never thought that was possible but I guess it could happen. I mean...anyways. Is it Kabuto or did Oro take his body? meh1!!!!!!! -protects Gaara from council members and breaths life into Neji! Don’t die!!! gya! yada! yada! Well. After a long pause you sure started right back up with a bang but I want to know more about kabuto... If he didn't want Naruto hurt then it might suggest Orochimaru is alive and wants Naruto's body. He or the real Kabuto would know about the song because may haps Sasuke would tell them that...I think. I am slightly saddened that it wasn't Sasuke (I kinda liked his Emoy and angesty ways) But it is better to not go the almost cannon way of fan fiction. Gaara and Naruto full fill my angst needs (I love those boys -SQUEEZE-) Keep up the good work...I'm a little worried...but I have faith in you -big thumbs up- not to let me down ^__________- -gives coffee and pocky galore *Strawberry ones too!*-

Is this going to end up being narusasu? I hope so. Gaara is hot but Sasuke is way hotter, especially being such a power hungry bastard.

This is really intriguing and I am looking forward to how the story develops. Nice characterizaitons, too. A good read!

yay new chappie!!!!!!!! you're welcome :)
you didn't kill Neji! wow! this gets more interesting by the minute! can't wait to see what happens next!!!!! I put to many exclamation signs...

This is so dam good. I can not wait for the next chapter.

Wow....I mean....wow. O_O Limbo it is I guess. Why whould Naruto consent? Unless it was a trick and he was forced to by his own chakra? How strange. But Naruto would leave peacefully if would save his village (at least I think that) Now I want to know what the group wants with naruto if their taking him peacfully and not wanting him to get hurt. It dosn't seem that they want his demon...hmmm -scratches chin- intresting. I'm glad Neji hasn't died....yet at least. Poor guy. He has such a hard time...maybe..he needs a doctor...-smirks and nods- and I know just the person..-nudge nudge- And Gara, though, I think no longer with a demon inside him is still scary when pissed...even worse then my teaacher when I forgot to turn in a 10 page term paper -shudders and hides- Oh! -gives cookies, coffee, and hugs for updating even if it was hard to write!-

Wow, this is some serious stuff here. This is one of the longest battles i've ever read. You got some vision in that head of yours. Whats going on with Naruto man! That's what i wanna know. Good job. Update soon.

hello again!!! :)
you killed Neji...(shock)...oh well, as long as you dont kill Gaara everything is fine :D
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