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OOOOOOOOOHH _O_ -died- omg omg omg....sweet! It isn't Sasuke...demo...arg! You so can't let Neji do that...can you? -cough cough- Anyways, I'm glad that the ninjas attacked because I want to know who is behind everything. I couldn't be Sasuke...but. it could be someone using his body? Or someone else. Those three couldn't be the only ones who knew of the song. But, on a side note: I will always try to review. I don't have much time to anymore, just a few minutes between classes before I dart across campus -hangs head- But it is something to look forward for. The Library here has nothing...a few interesting nonfiction but not really anything else. Even Horror books are hard to come by so this is like my little library ^_- Keep up the good work. And even if you write your ass off it would be good for it neh? -Trying to look on bright side of things-

Excellent story!

wow. Thats all I can really say to this chapter. Everything is moving so fast its awsome! I wonder who died though. Neji, Kiba, and shikamaru were next to Naruto right? So that means it wasn't them. Was it the newer ninjas? That dosn't make sense it would have to be an older one because the man said "You were promising once". Ack. Good chapter! =D I would offer to help Beta but I still have some english grammer mistakes sooo yeah.. ^_- Your writing is awsome and I dont just say that because I like the smut you put in it....>_>....-cough- Anyways, I hope Naruto stays okay with the whole option of Sasuke being back from the dead.

Slightly confused here, but still very satisfied. As long as the story advances its all good. So Naruto is sure now. I was kinda feeling that Sasuke was alive myself since a few chapters ago. Something tells me that once we get a full glimpse of the bastard he won't necessaily be jumping for joy that Naruto and Gaara have been so close....Either way, another good chap. Update soon!

OMG I love your story!! Just started reading it last night and now I am up to this chapter!!!! Please please continue!!!! This is the first Gaara/Naruto fanfic that I have found that I like! All of the other ones are just blah to me!!! I really enjoy this story!!!! Keep up the great work!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter ::dances::

I like your story. There are few Naru/Gaara fics out there and I'm glad to see yours out there. My only suggestion is to get a second beta. There are still problems with your text. Some words are used incorrectly, some sentences have syntax problems and your descriptions/dialogue is confusing at times.

I look forward to your future chapters. ^^

What the hell happens? Is Sasuke really still alive like Gaara is being to think? Are the other Kage's that dumb? Ahh! Not enough sleep, too engrossed in this story.

That was.........hot. -cough- HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -cough cough- yup! I will thank both of you for the stories! ^_- The interaction between the Kages' is interesting, I don't know much about the other villages (never stayed up with the series enough) to know who is who but it seems plausible to me neh? Smut was hot. Cheers for you once more. Still, umm, if anyone ever gets a hold of your computer there going to be shocked yeah? Anyways. You seem to be getting better at writing and without REALLY proof-reading it I can't tall any grammar mistakes once more (I read really fast, almost skimming fast cause I want to know what happens so bad so I tend not to catch a lot of things that I should.) This is partly why I get confused sometimes, so sorry in advance. I wish I could do actual helpful comments but not tonight. I hope you have a great Valentines day (If you celebrate it that is).

I find it difficult to get into this story. I can't believe that such an incompetent would be left in charge of konoha for however many years it took. This story would be great...if Naruto wasn't Hokage--yeah yeah, I know you want to make him appear like a powerful and romantic figure but he comes across as a dork and your hand (the author) is apparent in the manipulation of the story.

Plus, what's with Gaara's sand being able to restrain the red chakra when Naruto 'lost control'? As far as I understood from the manga and anime, that's the one thing that can defeat his sand. But Meh~ Just thought I'd leave some feedback and tell you why I didn't like your story...if you care. >_>

~sands

ooooo I lubbers ur story! can't wait for the next update.

Make Neji happy .. I lubbers him too. ^_^

~VIVA*LA*SMUT~