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I haven't been able to review due to AFF.net's new policies, but just to let you know that I'm still reading and enjoying. There really aren't enough Gaara and Naruto fanfics out there and this one is really well written.

~ Kaze

So cool! Can not wait for the next chapter.

Noooooo that "Together" was too sweet... auuuuu >_______<
Oh, and forget what I said about poor Neji... fuck him for being a jerk ò__ó

And the plot thickens! what a great story this is, suck detailed information about all that is going on and I love the developing relationship between Gaara and Naruto, can't wait till you update again :)

Ahhhh, yes i get this. And you have not thrown me off. The raging fangirl in my mind wnats to say that the teme isn't dead. But then how is it that he didn't die if that were true? Ahhh, i'd rather read and find out what the deal really is, and i can't wait. This NarutoxGaara thing warms my heart. Gaara's gonna have to keep a close eye on him. At least they are together. I still feel a lil bad for Neji, but Shikmaru's slinkin around lol, so i'm not that mad. Update soon.

Soo close. Naruto must be careful from now on neh? The Kages are not afraid for their citizens if Naruto stays within their walls? Even if the Nins were only after Hokage it still would seem odd. But, then again, the Kages could team up right? I find it strange that Neji hesitated and mayhap the other group knows what’s going on? This chapter, for me, seemed to go fast as if building up to a miniature climax. I rather liked it. At first, the living corpse part confused me on whether shikumaru was killed or the nin was, but as I read on, I realized that the nin was. Your writing is getting better and better and you can tell that you have a beta, I'm so happy ^_^ Keep up the good work! (And stay on top of your homework, I got too far behind -cry- and now must scramble to get caught up so don't do that! but keep writing as well!)

This is really good. Can not wait for the next chapter.

Konnichi wa!!!
i luffsess yous story!!!!!!!
I'm in a chibi mood right now, you'll have to excuse me.
i love the thing about Gaaras eyes, i know this is supposed to be a review and i'm not doing too well, but this is my very first time reviewing anything, so please bear with me.T-T....
I also write fanfics, so please except my....wait...i'm not going to give you any critisism...oh, wait, may i? i wish to be as friendly and tolerable as humaly possible....well, without seeming entirely too weird, of course,but still.... anyways.. if you don't mind i'd like to suggest the use of slightly more complicated words, such as...aperture, rather than butt, or ass. not that i'm saying you have to, or would, simply a friendly suggestion, and instead of saying without stopping, perhaps the word incessantly would be more suiting, and so on and so forth. I find your fanfic to be so incredibly plausible that it actualy may not make any difference whether or not you were actually to do so. I also understand that you may be in a tad bit of a predicament as not all english speaking people may be able to comprehend the actual meaning of some of the words you might otherwise replace more simple words with. please pardon me for any possible rudeness that may have been taken from anything i have said. i wish you the best, thank you for your time.
Ja ne!

Sincerely,


~Cucumber monger
P.S. your story is so kawaii!!!!!!!! when you wrote the section of the fic about Sasuke-san telling Naruto-san to wake up, and what not, I almost cried! Good work! omedeto gozaimasu!/congratulations!
bye bye!!!!

HIII!!!!!!! watashi wa nihongo wo hanashimasu! ehehe! well, a fair bit anyways. have you ever written a fic in all nihongo?
i wonder, well, anyways, i luvves the smexyness!!!!! WEWT! LEMONS!!!!!!!! hehe, yous gunna kill me for this but...

STRAWBERRY MOUNTED LEMONS!!! XDDDDDDD!!!!!! woot! <3

Okies! ^-^ now that i got that out of my system.......oh, hey, would you take a look at my page? i wanna know if anyone likes it, and i love your fic so im wondering if juu woulds please look at my page thingey. thanksess for considering! BTW on my page thingey there's a picture of Sasuke with a pancake on his head! and its all yaoiness and man-smex, my favorate quote is:
"love man-smex. man-smex is love" so yahs......anyways keep up the good work! juus is awesome!!!!!!!!! woot! <3 ^.~
Ja ne!
bye byes! ^.^
Sincerely,


~Cucumber monger
P.S. i'm on a sugar high right now, don't mind me. XD

I am sorry because i think i just double posted this, but i forgot the URL to my page thingey, please forgive me!!!!! T-T
*cries self to death* oh, and BTW i'm on a sugar high, so almost nothing i say will make sense, please bear with me, there are no pauses in my speach, i'm too hyper.


HIII!!!!!!! watashi wa nihongo wo hanashimasu! ehehe! well, a fair bit anyways. have you ever written a fic in all nihongo?
i wonder, well, anyways, i luvves the smexyness!!!!! WEWT! LEMONS!!!!!!!! hehe, yous gunna kill me for this but...

STRAWBERRY MOUNTED LEMONS!!! XDDDDDDD!!!!!! woot! <3

Okies! ^-^ now that i got that out of my system.......oh, hey, would you take a look at my page? i wanna know if anyone likes it, and i love your fic so im wondering if juu woulds please look at my page thingey. thanksess for considering! BTW on my page thingey there's a picture of Sasuke with a pancake on his head! and its all yaoiness and man-smex, my favorate quote is:
"love man-smex. man-smex is love" so yahs......anyways keep up the good work! juus is awesome!!!!!!!!! woot! <3 ^.~


Ja ne!

bye byes! ^.^


Sincerely,


~Cucumber monger

P.S. i'm on a sugar high right now, don't mind me. XD
and here is the URL to my page thingey!
http://www.groups.msn.com/GreenChoclateBunnies/yaoi.msnw