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I am soooooooooo sorry because i just triple posted this, but i didn't get to add the URL to my page thingey cuz the review thingies have a word amount limit. Please forgive me!!!!! T-T
*cries self to death* oh, and BTW i'm on a sugar high, so almost nothing i say will make sense, please bear with me, there are no pauses in my speach, i'm too hyper.

Sincerely,


~Cucumber monger

P.S. here is the URL to my page thingey!
http://www.groups.msn.com/GreenChoclateBunnies/yaoi.msnw

...hmmm What is going on and who is the new leader? I would rank this as a good chapter. I'm proud of Naru putting his foot down and not letting the other Kage's tell him what to do. Really, isn't that what Naruto does all the time and how he became Hokagae...fighting people who said he couldn't do it? Neji and the others got one!!!! hahahaha...I had faith. Neji really works hard to protect the Hokage sooo...he should have a 'friend'...-nudge nudge-. Not much to say now so I'm gonna leave you with a cheer to updating!

Wow, there is just plot everwhere here! Where is this all coming from! Good job though i must say. Who is this leader, and this guy who appears at the end. Why does he not want Naruto turned in dead? I have my theories but i don't wanna say. Anyway, cant wait till next update!

Hiyaaa, thanks for the reply ^____^
Excelent chapter !!!!! (do you mind if i keep on reviewing, I tend to review each update u__u)
Very nice touch with the "Who us?" xD That was SO cool xD
Hey, want me to beta some?

Awwww, Gaara and Naruto.... well maybe mostly Naruto, fighting for their love. Defending their right to be together to the other kages. So romantic..... Okay, I'm sorry. I'm done being stupid now. I'm never going without food again. Half a piece of bacon and a bagel is not a meal that will carry you through a whole day. Anyways moving on...

I'm having some.... thoughts about the story. I'm wondering if maybe Sasuke isn't really dead, if he's the one who's trying to capture Naruto. Or maybe Orochimaru, given the hissiness of the mysterious figure. I can't wait for your next update to find out what they're going to do with this whoever it is and for more GaaNaru and the meetings and Neji and others. Yay

OMFGGGG, you absolutely ROCK!!!

You know, I like smutty stories (guess avery girl who enters this site does) but i love above all, smutty stories which have a descent plot, and nice development of characters... and yours is one of the best i read on thin part of anywhere.

Seriously, excelent fic, hope you will update soon, asyou have been doing ^_____^

Also love poor neji in this fic... poor, poor guy, he only got to be the last resourse for a horny angry oh-my-lover-is-gonne-and-I'm-pissed naruto, tsk, tsk...

O, I also saw your devart (I'm dragonpunchi over there), very nice juicy gallery ^^

Er, sorry for being such a bother, but i've got a small requesty, just a situation I would die to read written by you here... could it ever happen a situation where Naruto has to comfort a sad Gaara... just a thaught I had, it's OK if it doesn't fit, but well... i think it's worth asking ^__^

Thanks so much for the effort, and this great piece of writting
Mey

P.S.: Your smut is glorious >___<

No, you never did e-mail me. And it shows; I found a multitude of spelling errors, misplaced or missing punctuation marks and a boat load of other stuff. But...I gotta say, this...was...HOT!!! I'm still on fire from reading it!

Ep! That was so amazing! I'm really glad you finished it! i can't wait for the next part! Yay! Hope you update soon! ^_^! Great story!

Ohh my! Someone found out about those two kages snoggin in the shower. I wonder how the other kages react to this juicy news ehh? I must say that a jealous Gaara would quite well do it for me...I think. Neji does need someone to love...so he dosn't mess with Narutos' and Gaaras' thing. You keep bringing up situations that are sooo exciting...mmm....Naru and Gaara caught in the act. It was only a matter of time though till someone outside of the leaf and sand village found out about them right? I hope it works out between the two because Naruto in the beginning of the story was no fun (being depressed and not taking care of himself). The scene was hot...thankyou so much for it. Gambatte with your beta!!! I know your stories will get even better because of it!! -Waves and gives more cookies and coffe- Ja ne!

I read this all in one go. I love the story! But PLEASE go into more detail with the intimacy scenes! Update soon. :)