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Ep! That was soooo awesome! I love the way you write and you should totally finish this! I mean... you can't leave us hanging! Please! Well, great story! and i hope you update soon!

Ok, 1. YOU HAD BETTER FINISH THAT SHOWER SCENE OR I SWEAR ILL HATE YOU FOREVER UNTIL TOMARROW. And 2. I feel bad for poor Neiji too. What'ya think about having him and kiba or shikamaru hook up? Anyhoo, loving this per usual and please finish the shower scene. I love an inexperienced, uke, Naruto-seme, scene. Escpecially when its well written.

AHHH!!! Poor Neji! I feel so bad for him. -gives him cookie- I does care for Naruto a lot and that’s sweet. I'm glad Naruto talked to him about it, making it clear that it was over and done with. I hope that they will remain friends (but I'm sure they will cause your not mean like that =D). Gaara knows what’s going on? I think you made it clear that he did, I don't want Gaara jealous though….a jealous Gaara might be very very sexy...-cough- anyways!!! Mmmmmmmmm…...lemons…..nice. Poor Gaara losing control, Naruto isn’t very nice…or…is he? One thing I do have to comment on that I think I haven’t before is the fact that your smut scenes don’t break up the plot that goes on around the characters. Smut is good yes, but a great plot that weaves it together is even better and I think that you managed to make a good equilibrium between the two. I have to congratulate you. I usually don’t find one with both. Most have just smut without purpose and others have plot with no yummies. =D –gives a trillion everlasting fresh cookies- I absolutely love your other stories…but I never comment…I’m bad at it yes I know.

To sum it all up: I loved this chapter and can’t wait for your next installment and I’m sooo happy the chapter was long (I’ve read it three times now) I also love you writing style, its good and not to stuffy or not dumbed down with youthonisims(sp?) that scream immaturity. AND, I love your other stories as well so keep up the good work and I will cheer you on with cookies and coffee (if you like it) while you work!!!!!!!!!!!!

愛してる！！！
うかがうーちゃん。

That was AWESOME. Finish it, finish it, finish it! Leave that boring meeting for later. As for Neji...yea, i do feel bad...i'd be open to whatever you might have planned. Him with Shika, Kiba, Naru/Gaara, i don't care, as long as its good lol. Ah, btw i noticed something, there's a part there where you say that Naruto grabs the soap, you made a lil error and put soup, and at the very end when Gaara says "Uzumaki", you put "Uzamaki" or something like that. Thought i'd just point it out so you can fix it later. Other than that, it was an awesome chapter.

Ahhh, why can't I throttle Neji? He was mean to Naruto! Grrr you, Neji Hyuuga! Well, anyways, my e-mail address is addoedeb_fox@yahoo.com. Send me an e-mail and let's see what you've got. Although, if this lemon is a sample of it, then I say we can make this work just fine!

...I love lemons between these two! Hot!!!

Honestly the only one that I can tolerate being with Neji other then Naruto or Garra is Shikamaru :grins: Though if you wanted to make it a threesome :evil smirk:

I dunno how I missed the last update, but at least I got to read 2 chapters this time around, yay:) Anyways moving on, I'd thought the relationship between Neji and Naruto was more Neji's one-sided feelings, and I guess they are, but 'fuck buddies'. I hadn't expected that but it's definitely interesting. It's good though that they had a talk and it feels like Neji's moving past them somewhat, or starting to. I like your portrayal of Neji, he's jealous and angry but he's not a bad guy. I've noticed that in a lot of SasuNaru stories they like to put him down to build Sasuke up, make him an evil bastard, and I know this isn't a SasuNaru story, but it's an easy pattern to fall into. So yay for Good Neji, because in the end while he may be a bit of a conceited ass at times he's not a bad person.

Naruto and Gaara: I hope they figure (or you I guess:D) a way to work out their relationship. It would be sad to see another 'celebrity couple' break up because of distance:D You know there's something else I felt I wanted to say but I am blank right now, damn. Well if I remember I'll come back

But before I finish, pairings for Neji. When I think of the part of the one chapter, Shino comes to mind as a possible pairing for Neji given his coming after Neji and talking to him while he was watching Naruto.

AGGGG!!!! -Kills the log in page then pouts- That is getting old real quick like. -Eats you cookie...more like gobbles actually- =D So that’s why Neji is all messed up around Naruto...he...heheh...Gaara and Neji really don't like each other. I really liked this chapter; it let me know what was actually going on with Neji. I feel bad for Naruto though; he still isn't completely over Sasuke is he? Now Gaara and Neji like him (Though I suspect Neji won't do anything...O_o....) I can't wait for another update!!! WOOT! I always check your stories before I go to work that way I'm happy...which at work I'm usually not but this story makes me happy. -Gives your special brownies and cookies-

Wow, i really like what you've done with this story. Good job. I'm wondering whats gonna happen here with this whole Neji, Naruto, Gaara thing. Update soon.

Oh, thanks for the acknowledgement! Yay me! I still don't like Neji pushing himself at Naruto. He belongs with Gaara, you damned brat! So back off! *takes a deep breath before he throttles Neji* Now then, are you still looking for a beta? I'd be more than happy to fulfill that role for ya. Just let me know, 'kay?