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Good chapter... nice and satisfying... keep up the good work, nyan! Evil plot bunnies be gone! *chants madly* nyah! I will continue reading even if you kill kakashi... but you better be prepared for my pained screams, nyah!!

AHH! I have to wait!? Oh well, I guess I can have a bit of patience neh? Neji keeps confusing me, putting me on the edge. Clearly, he cares for the Hokage, but does he care for him more then he should? No character, by the way, screams OOC. At the same time however, it has been forever since I have watched the show or read the manga. You do a good job in my opinion and are one of the better more…..hmm….-thinks-…originally refreshing authors of this particular topic. –WOOT for vocab!- I’m glad Gaara is back around Naruto even if it is a meeting of all the Kages because he might sleep better? I have one more issue I swear then I will hit enter and let you read this!! At the end of the latest chapter, Naruto and Gaara are away from the group enough to have privacy. Who were those two sets of eyes…..Neji…that’s a obvious guess but..arg…I hate waiting for something that I thoroughly enjoy reading!! I think I found only a few tense problems in this section but nothing that hurts the reading…and I suck at tense so I should NOT　 be talking =D –HUG- love your work!!!

Ay, they'd made life so difficult what that 'Must be logged in' rule now. I hate logging in:'( *sigh* Oh well. This time I really am gonna be short. I just wanted to say YAY for Gaara, I'm glad they're back together and also I like the little hints of Neji's feelings that you put into the chapter. Like the part where Naruto was sleeping and Neji was tempted to touch, but he said that Naruto made the situation clear to him before. Like he'd made a move but was rebuffed. He can't be too happy about the situation with Gaara now. He tried to get Naruto but Naruto said no but now Gaara's come in and seemed to get Naruto so easily. I imagine that those eyes at the end could be Neji's, though they could be someone else also. Exciting, I can't wait for your update.

YATTA! a review for the story! it was great I missed two updates, thanks to school, and well planing for j-con! I am so going to be there this year! ie. jealous Neji! awesomness! I cant wait for more!

Aww so he misses Gaara, in his own way. I like where this is going. The prisoners leaving though doesnt sound good. Whats gonna happen? Update soon.

....*dies from suspense*...not fair! I want to know why the group is after him...I want to know!! please!!! *sniff* And Gaara should be there to help protect Naru right? I wonder why Neji dosn't like Gaara at all and maybe not for the obvious reasons. I didn't see any major problems in your story that stood out at first. Mayhaps a fewer smaller ones but no one can be perfect. Novels from great authors sometimes still have mistakes and are constantly being fixed and edited. I do have to say I love the interaction with Naruto and his guards. Naruto not wanting protection and the guards refusing to leave...just like Naruto. I do want to know what is going on with the strange group of Ninjas. One question though, is the kyuubi still inside Naruto? Or does he just have ALOT more control over it? I'm sorry I'm pretty sure you have already explained this earlier so sorry for the trouble. Great chapter and keep up the hard work!! Gambatte!!!

wonderful story so far... I like it a lot... please continue, ne? There is hope still for Naruto, nyah... Anko died... that's sad, but then... necessary. Just dont kill anybody else... ne? Makes me cry to see that... but yes, it was a great pair of chapters for me... and the smut was very nice... nyan! so, continue!

Only just noticed that this has been updated, but am looking forward to all the new chapters I've missed.

I'll write a proper review once I'm done

~ Kaze

Hrm. I've only read up to chapter 5 so far and I really like the story. What bothers me are the simple spelling and grammatical mistakes. You syntax is also strange. I like your story, but I recommend finding a beta. Perhaps you can try editing?

Jerking me around is not very nice. But I loved the smut and can't wait to read more.