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for I knew you would find me

by VRon8899

person Hello
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
New reader! :D I hope Naruto's alright. I like Nar/Gaa fanfictions. :p
person eien no ren
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are evil!!! Please update! I want to know what happens! The tension is killing me!! nyan!!! Nyan!! Gaaranaru fluff!!!! Nyan!!!
person eien no ren
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh... I forgot to point out... There is a little problem with the Your Kazekage... Your Hokage... you write you're Hokage and You're kazekage... it confuses me... nyan... shouldn't it be "your" hokage? "You're" means you are something but does not indicate possesion... ne?

Anyway, great story... and Happy New Year!!
person eien no ren
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!
He kissed him! He kissed him!! He kissed him!!! Thank you!!!
Now we are talking!! I havent cheered on for a mere kiss in forever!! That was a great chapter... great gift for us, your readers!! Can we hope to see more soon??? Thank you!! nyan!! I love Gaara's decisiveness... dont let him rest until you get your answers racoon!!! Ruthless attack!! Nyan! Go Gaara, Go Gaara, Go Gaara, Go, Go!!!
person abi
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, just answering the 'kuinochi' question, though I don't know if someone else already has.

And no, you didn't spell it right. Hehe. :3 It's 'kunoichi'...and, it's a word used especially for female ninja. So you did use it in the right context.

LOVE the fic, btw. Especially Gaara's needling. Somehow, I don't think Naruto would respond to anything other than what Gaara is putting him through. It all fits so nicely.

abi
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter the most so far ^^ you spelled Kankurou's name wrong and you spelled Gaaras last name wrong, its Sabaku. But thats it, just thought you should know.
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for some GaaraxNaruto action ^^ ..... but when is there?
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the tension between them... its interesting to see how a tired, irritable, guilty man acts... specially before one that used to bring him peace and calmness... good for you Gaara!! nyan!!!
person LadyApollonia
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is 'kunoichi'. Female ninja are called that because it is how you write the kanji for 'woman'. Hiragana 'ku', katakana 'no' and the kanji 'ichi'. Great fic by the way. I really like it.
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chappy ^^ I like the confronations with Naruto and Gaara. Hope you get done soon.