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for I knew you would find me

by VRon8899

person Kkie
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaw, sadness. I luffle it so far~
person DK
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you have this set out, Naruto feeling so guilty about killing Sasuke even though he knew that he loved him, Gaara would be the perfect person to make him forget or at least take away the guilt, please continue with this story.
person eien no ren
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting, not boring...if it was I wouldnt leave a review... hmmmm narugaara... make it good and I will give you cookies...ne?
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty boring. Sorry but you just need some more action and maybe some more comedy in it to keep our interest ok. I think you can do some good with this but just make it a lil more.... exciting. Other than that you just need to hurry and update now.