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for I knew you would find me

by VRon8899

person Manin
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! a new chapter, this was a really good chapter, and no you haven't lost your readers...well not me anyways =)
person TFizzle
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have 3 requests,
1. Stop teasing with the GaaraNaruGaara smexiness
AND
2. Please write the NejiShika oneshot
AND
3. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

I LOOOOVE this story!!!!!!!!!
person Ukagau
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh. Poor Gaara. I feel so bad for him sometimes because everything he loves ends up breaking. He just needs to be soothed and told that Naruto is not going to break and leave him alone once more. Giving up his duty as Kage was sad; he wanted to prove that he could protect the village. Now Naruto and he can devote much time to each other yes yes -poke poke-. In addition, WHY does Shika have a sore back and bum? -Raises eyebrows- hmmmmm pray tell. Great chapter hun. Try not to work yourself so much anymore on trying to write multiple chapters from multiple stories at one time. Kay?

No big mistakes, just a few spelling but I think I caught only one or two (And I still find errors in published novels that have people *professional people* look over them. =D As always I give much Ramue and Botan Rice Candy love.

Ukagau
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, but too short.

I was hoping for another NaruGaa lemon, but I guess I have to wait.
person llyoung
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes please some Neji and Shika smut would be wonderful.
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I missed you. I missed this. I missed us.

LOL. Where have you been?? This smex to come better be smutacular! We waited and waited. I'm glad Gaara was able to get passed his fear. Naruto wuvs him man. Update soon!!
person gaara89
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update!!!
person Kimiko-kun
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0_0 why'd gaara loose the kazekage post?! he jus did the same thing naruto did 4 him *damn over-paranoid council >=(* well,i suppose the upside is that he has more time to spend with naruto, especially since he's not fully healed yet and goin thru anouther guilt trip.
and when are you gonna get to neji n shika? its about time he wises up and stops hangin on naruto =P.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii!!! I love the GaaraxNaruto Pairing to DEATH!!

you are an amazing author!! keep up the amazing work!!

*gives naruto/gaara plushies*
person MysteriousStranger
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::swoons and faints from joy overload::