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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So it took me about three or so days to reach the point in the story and i must say...IT IS AMAZING!!!! i love love love it...oooo naruto and gaara are soooo cute! but i've been wondering if your going to get neji and shika togeather cuase i don't know if i was just read the signlas wrong cuz those two are such a cute pairing, but i've been assuming for a while that something was happening between those two?? i hope there is ^^ anyway keep up the awesome work and i can't wait to read the next chapter
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kick that council's butt Temari! hehe. Sorry I neglected to review faster. I admit it. I am a lazy bum! Good chapter overall. I think everyone was worried and stressed out over Naruto. Now he has his face in the rock wall XD. On one point, I must agree with Naruto in that the speech that Tsunade was saying did make him sound dead. Sad, but I think my eyes kind of popped out at that point even though I knew you would not kill him off like that...right? Gaara was kicked off his seat, well; those dirty men never liked him. Now he can be with Naruto more and not worry about being the Kazekage. Is Temari the Kage now? I enjoyed the ending, where the two men were just laying in bed together. A peaceful scene such as that was a nice breath from the pain torn and guilt torn atmosphere just moments before.
Another great chapter! I wish I could help you with the grammar and such, but it seems all right for me –hugs! - As much Ramue and other candies you want and as much as you want.
Another great chapter! I wish I could help you with the grammar and such, but it seems all right for me –hugs! - As much Ramue and other candies you want and as much as you want.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review Whore.
Heh, just kidding.
Kudos for another great chapter, and I look forward to seeing what's in store for Naruto and Gaara. I certainly hope you continue this!
10/10
Heh, just kidding.
Kudos for another great chapter, and I look forward to seeing what's in store for Naruto and Gaara. I certainly hope you continue this!
10/10
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I want to see where it leads, so please post the next chapter. And Vacation was pretty good too ;)
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Let me just put it this way. This is the best story I have ever read. Please update soon.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It looks like a good fic, if I didn't have scroll over it read it. If you can fix that problem I'd love to read.
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story...So far, so good, i guess...The thing is, your stories are being
beta'd, right?? Well, i suggest you get new betas, becuz there are still alot of mistakes in the
grammar and punctuation dept..and i'm only on chapter 2!!!!
beta'd, right?? Well, i suggest you get new betas, becuz there are still alot of mistakes in the
grammar and punctuation dept..and i'm only on chapter 2!!!!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He lives! yay! *all thanks to kyuubi being his usual manipulative self ^.^* poor gaara tho, getting all worked up like that, i want to hug him *he'd probably kill me tho =P*
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gomen! I did not mean to make you worry. If it’s because I was late, I do not have internet myself (I don’t pay for it) I just use someone else’s network for my laptop, and sometimes it does not come through so I cannot respond as fast as I usually do. No worries though, I would never just not review, even if I completely despised the chapter ^_-. About Neji, It is not really an e'ff up per say because, that is the last thing Naruto saw (or was told? few chapters back) so it makes sense that he might not know that Neji actually survived. I still do not know if that would keep Naruto from killing Sasuke. There was no other way for that string of events to be ended. Poor Naruto. On your newly updated stories, I will review them perhaps after this story is finished so I do not get confused….which happens a lot. Gomenasai!
Anyways! Yeah for Sakura. She kicks butt in the medical field. I do not know what Naruto would have done without her. Good description of her healing him. It is true; it would not have been easy for her to do. Kyuubi is manipulative! It is reasonable to concur that he is found of his host. Funny how threatening his country and Gaara woke Naruto up. I hope you let me in on how the council is going to deal with a neurotic Gaara. -Waggles eyebrows- It is going to take a bit for him to get over this battle. It is sad that he blames himself for this, but Naruto needs to knock some sense into him! His name was the first one that Naruto said when he woke up.–Snickers- Actually, it seems that Gaara is the reason the Naruto woke up, right? Naruto has to do some recovery and soothing Gaara’s fear. Overall, this was a nice wrap up chapter for the fight scene, letting the speed slow down (for me at least) to not as fast. I do not think I have been this excited over a Naruto story except the original story itself! *except fillers* Good job! -Hands more candy-
Yeah, I like those cadies, and the Ramue soda pop that comes in the glass bottle with a marble as the stopper! Horribly expensive in the Mid-West, but worth it for me. –Hands out more Botan Rice Candy and various others- write on!
Anyways! Yeah for Sakura. She kicks butt in the medical field. I do not know what Naruto would have done without her. Good description of her healing him. It is true; it would not have been easy for her to do. Kyuubi is manipulative! It is reasonable to concur that he is found of his host. Funny how threatening his country and Gaara woke Naruto up. I hope you let me in on how the council is going to deal with a neurotic Gaara. -Waggles eyebrows- It is going to take a bit for him to get over this battle. It is sad that he blames himself for this, but Naruto needs to knock some sense into him! His name was the first one that Naruto said when he woke up.–Snickers- Actually, it seems that Gaara is the reason the Naruto woke up, right? Naruto has to do some recovery and soothing Gaara’s fear. Overall, this was a nice wrap up chapter for the fight scene, letting the speed slow down (for me at least) to not as fast. I do not think I have been this excited over a Naruto story except the original story itself! *except fillers* Good job! -Hands more candy-
Yeah, I like those cadies, and the Ramue soda pop that comes in the glass bottle with a marble as the stopper! Horribly expensive in the Mid-West, but worth it for me. –Hands out more Botan Rice Candy and various others- write on!
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gaara. So much pain! And in regards to Kyuubi and Naruto, I figured that would be the accurate way to god Naruto into getting the will back. That one part with Sakura i could imagine perfectly in my mind. She did good! I wonder how things'll play out from here now. Great chap! :)