rate_review Reviews

Oh my. Cue the cheerleaders! (Fight! Fight! Fight!)

You killed my Sasuke!!! You killed my Naru-chan.

Anyway, I totally didn't expect you to bring back Naruto this way (you are going to bring him back aren't you?). Hehee...Kyuubi is good after all.

However, wouldn't Naruto be sad? He killed Sasuke the second time?! I don't think I can live on with such burden. He will be soooo sad.

Squeal- Thankies! It is a good story so why wouldn't I neh? I think I might have almost cried when Sasuke died. Innocent all along, then he f''ed up. -tear- But Neji isn't dead and Gaara will live, but will Naruto? In the end, I think the way the two went out was realistic. Even if there is nothing romantic, there is still a lot of history between the two and Sasuke would only accept dying by Naruto's hand. Nevertheless, I need closure!!! I think about this at work, so please do not let it eat away at me! Even if Naruto is dead, give a brief chapter on the aftermath, and Naji!!! He needs some loving. -Grin- And Gaara! What about him? What will he do without Naruto or how will he care for Naruto and fix him all up afterwards? I fee so bad for him and Naruto, but a lot for Gaara because he might think that it was his fault for not protecting Naruto. However, I could just be wrong. ^^

The grammar was okay; I speed-read so grammar does not hit me in the face until about the fifth or sixth time. Good job! On the issue of Naruto seeming weak, I did not see it at all. Those three characters are strong, Naruto is not weak he has just been through a lot. -Hands you Poky and Botan Rice Candy- Its awesome, with an edible inner wrapper!

So I jus got caught up, and the fights were definitely exciting. I don't think you made Naruto any weaker than he has been in the manga/anime during really drawn out tough battles. My only question now is, will he live? And what's Gaara going to do without him?

Don't worry hun, you are doing a great job. I think I only saw a few quirky spots with spelling. And more is always better! Would look forward to it. :) take care, I hope to read more of your work soon!

HEY! What happened to Naruto and Gaara? You can't stop here! (can you?)

*hmm, jus realised i havent written a review here, oh well, better late than never :D*

this is the first good naruto fic ive read *its so damn hard to find a good story -_-*.i love the plot, plus its naruto and gaara,with a splash of over-possessive sasuke ^-^ *they did hook up a bit fast tho, but besides that i love it XD*

as for chap. 33...you cant end it there! sasuke's dead n naruto's pretty much making out with death with the amount of injuries he's got! *nice death scene there by the way =)* i wanna kno what happens next! *the chap needs a grammar check tho,there's a few words out of place*

NOOO!!!! I demand an epilogue/conclusion! That was a very good chap btw. I had a feeling Naruto would have to end it. Poor guy. I felt bad for Sasuke but i gotta say i feel worse for Naruto now. About Naruto being weak and stuff, i never felt that way. Then again ive never had gripe over that issue. You did good kid. Nice job!

This is the last chapter?!!? NO! I WANT AN EPILOGUE!! T.T One last moment between Gaara and Naruto please! Pwetty pwease! this fic is so great, it NEEDS an epilogue!

Woo Hoo!!! Sasuke is fucking dead. Its about goddamn time. The prick.


Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see how you conclude this.