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for I knew you would find me

by VRon8899

schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!....just....Wow! I love your story I've followed it since the beginning, I'm sorry it took me until this chapter to review, but I couldn't figure out how it worked ^^;; Gomen...

it would be really sad if you just ended it there, I would be a very sad fangirl if I couldn't at least know if Naruto lives or dies...

I loved how your story captured my attention and kept it until the end, not many stories can do that, kudo's to you!!

you are an amazing author! it would be so awsome if you wrote another Naru/Gaara story.....well best reguards.

-manin-chan
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, yes i noticed the little improvements here and there. Very nice.
person Ana
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BOO SASUKE! YAY GAARA SAVE NARUTO! FIGHT OFR HIS HONOR! lol. I am glad that Gaara finally found Naruto and I'm ready for a good fight. ^.~
~Ana~
person gaara89
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please oh please oh please oh please!!!! Update soon! This is the best story I've ever read. Please continue soon!
person Ukagau
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
こんいちわ Mindingmybusiness、

Oh yeah! Thanks for another great chapter! I kinda understand Sasuke's point of view...but he is still a bastard. Poor Neji. He tries so hard. -Offers pocky- I am interested on how Gaara will kick Sasu's ass, if he does... O_o that is messed up if you had Sasuke win... >_>. But Good story. The fight scenes have been good kudos’ for that. -hits you with a wet noodle- When this story is over with (a sad thought) I want you to pull out that story you said you've been playing with. ^^ The one thing I worry about when considering the outcome of your story is that if Sasuke does die, then will Naruto's mental state going to drop back to before he had Gaara? Will he still be Hokage >_< And gaara!!! ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am going to stop there.

がんばって!
じゃまった

~うかがう!
person gaara89
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow so its gonna start now huh! Crazy. Sasuke's fresh aint he? Kissing Naruto like that. And still...it's wrong but sexy lol. But if i was Gaara i'd be pissed too.Can't wait for the next chap. Great chap.
person Big Fan
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. You made a mistake, though. The name of the Demon of the sand is Shikaku, and one of the characters in this chapter was named Shikaku. Hope you don't mind me pointing it out.
person KingCobra
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely re-done. :)

Are you going to be re-doing the Gaara/Naruto Lemon chapters as well? Not sure how I'd feel if you did. On one level, I'm psyched to see how you'd redo those chapters. On the other hand, I like them the way they are. Bugger.

But, anyway, I can't wait to see how you carry on the rest of the fic. Kudos. :D
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiii i just wantedto say how much i lik you fic nd this is the first time i read a naruto X gaara fic
they are such a cute pairing <and i hope we get to read more about the others
i wanna see some more of kakashi and iruka-sansai <i wanna see more of them together you know
and please keep lee away from gaara id rathe die that see lee toutching my gaara
i ust want to poin out one thing in chap 7
Copy-cat ninja<LOL