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hiii i just wantedto say how much i lik you fic nd this is the first time i read a naruto X gaara fic
they are such a cute pairing <and i hope we get to read more about the others
i wanna see some more of kakashi and iruka-sansai <i wanna see more of them together you know
and please keep lee away from gaara id rathe die that see lee toutching my gaara
i ust want to poin out one thing in chap 7
Copy-cat ninja<LOL

"Sasuke knew how satisying it would be when it came to taming Naruto"...
You know, that phrase alone was enough to make me squeel like a raving mad fan girl....
I want to see that happen SO bad xD Lol, poor Naruto...
Now seriously, very nice chap. Specially the way things are comming down to happen. I like the way all charaters are being slowly drawn together.
I only have one thing to ask for the chaps to come: PLEASE don't get tangled with the not so important fights. Usually the weakest thing in Naruto fic is that many authors spend chapters and chapters describing fighting scenes between the main characters and lame ones, such as soldiers, dead guys, and such... So when the time comes for the Gaara groupie to fight, please, don't make it last 10 chaps u____u... I know it's kind of stupid for me to say something like that, since I'm not writing anything, but it's just something I'm pretty tired of seeing here and there.
Well, thanks again for the fast update, hope to read you soon ^_________^
And thaks for making Shino look cool... I lurv him xD

Great chap! It gives me a thrill to see Naruto be bad-ass. I'm glad you also mentioned Shikaku and the others. In many fics people tend to forget the older jounin exist. Logically with their skills they'd be needed in a crisis like this. Good job!

Oh my! -Puts up garlic- but can garlic protect one from a rabid author? (Don't think so but lets not tell her *points to Mindingmybusiness*) But anyways!!! Swimming in your head ehh...kinda crowed in there yet? -Grin- Yeah. I think the only person who rivals Sasuke in bastard and stuckupness would be my sister...but she cannot fight, nor is a sexy emo man so not to close when compared. (She is not a sadist either) Which Sasuke so is in this story. He loves causing pain. Mostly Naruto's. Sasuke needs to get his ass beat. SOOOOO, even if it takes until the end of your story, some ass beating would be a good thing neh? I was impressed on the seal breaking with the kyuubi. Gaara (When he had shukaku) did not have a seal like Naru's if I can remember correctly and I always wondered how Naruto's power would go if he did not have the seal. omg.. I'm rambling, but I really did like this. Deep down inside I kind of like Naru getting a little abused because in the end I know Gaara is soo going to rip apart anything that remotely hurts his Naruto -squee- oohhhh and I get to re-read your chapters for new goodies? Since you are changing them neh?

On a side note, I just wanted to tell you that your sasuke here is wonderful! Reminds me of another story that I like and surprise surprise, Sasuke is demanding, a bastard, and abbbuuusive to Naruto. I cannot give any of it away. Do not worry, the story lines are different I just thought it would be nice to know we are not alone in thinking Sasuke has a darker side to him. Nevertheless, if you ever wanted to check it out the author is cloudydayz and the story is "Breaking Apart" I like Gaara/Naru more and that is a sasu/Naru -pout- -hugs and gives cookies- sorry for rambling, see ya till your next chapter!

Hey, don't worry ^^
Take all the time you need to polish what you want, few people decide to improve what they have already done.
So as long as you don't quit the story, everythings fine ^^
Still, it's kinnda sad I won't be seeing little psycho Uchiha for a while u___u
Duh, anyways, hope to read you soon (or at least re-read you xD)

Oo Wow. Sasuke is a bastard or what! hehe. I think he might push a few to many buttons with telling Naruto that he is going to kill Gaara. I still think that Sasuke might do the "I'll kill you to keep you forever my pet" Kinda thing. That would be a little macrabe in my opinion (Maybe thats why it kinda..slightly, appeals..-squeak for being a little darker then I thought) I know Sasuke is a bastard just in general but has he gone kinda crazy like Itachi when talking about the Sharingan? Even if he hasn't, the chracter still hits me as very possesive and.....bratty. So good job on actually keeping them in character this long! -pats your back and offers Pocky in all flavors and coffee, and tea- Now I wonder who else your bringing into the picture now -raises brow- do you just lie in bed at night and drum your fingers together with a little evil smile cackling at how to make your readers weep in anticipation???? O_o...

FINALLY A GAARA PAIRING !
*dances around in circleS*
DEMM YOU T_T youre goin to make me fail my exams, i started today and finished all ur chapters today too. can barely wait for more !
btw there are a few things that i have noticed that i would like to point out.

''She rapped watching as the chuunin fled from her presence. She released a low sigh at his departure, Gaara being gone had caused such instability within the council and the village itself. Some of the Elders had even gone as far as to proclaim that Konoha had been the cause of this and all treatise should be cut immediately, luckily Kankuro was able to threaten them all into reclaiming those views''

how did she know of that when she wasnt in the village ? as far as i member the whole time she was with gaara then wennt to erm the mist village or w.e (bad concentration and memory span).

oh this line ?


''Oh just let me in I don’t need to be announced for my own brother''


was the love LOL that is so like her !




jus a lil mistake i noticed here.


''but the mention of Sasuke killing Gaara caused more then anger to fill his body, it enraged him and that anger curled red hot through his belly easily fueled by the demon within his body''


''more thEn anger'' s'pposed to be thAn.

erm i might be able to beta for you MIGHT but really you should use me as a last resort with my concentration span and the fact that i have exams atm O_o. (yes thank you very much for posting something i always wanted and jus at the brink of my exams). erm if u would want me as ur beta would u plz contact me on laterdeeplove@hotmail.com with a subject sayin so ?


oh and btw i noticed ur gaara is a BIT OOC. tho i dont blame you, that character aint easy to write ^^, especially if youre aimin for intimacy while dealing with him.

Yayyyyyyyyyyyy. Yes!!! New chappie ^^
I've said it once and I will many more: Sasuke sadism is absolutely gorgeous ^^
Dunno how this will end, but I hope he gets to lay his fingers in poor Naruto once more :drooooool:
Well, hope to read you again (kyaaaa, can't wait for the next... they are just so great TT____TT) and thanks for allways answering ^^

That chapter wasn't confusing at all. I obviously want some questions answered at certain parts but other than that I could follow what was going on. Basically love Naruto with everyone but Sasuke with only a few exceptions. I love the plot and can't wait until Gaara finds Sasuke and hopefull kills him. ^.~
~Ana~

Wow. Happy to be able to read your new updated. ** dancing around **

Btw, I'm confused. Why the men called Sasuke 'Kabuto' ??