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May 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this story let me quess it was itachi that got naruto pregnant please continue
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to tell you that you gave too many clues as to who raped naruto.
Now in the first chap. you said a bug landed on nruto and in the 3rd the guy had black hair.
now who do we know that has black hair and controls bugs.
SHINO.
please tell me if i got it right. and keep up the good work with updates.
Now in the first chap. you said a bug landed on nruto and in the 3rd the guy had black hair.
now who do we know that has black hair and controls bugs.
SHINO.
please tell me if i got it right. and keep up the good work with updates.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya!!!!....why did ya let Naruto get raped?..hmmm?...anywayzz...wanna know more of the storie..
There is a lot of guyz with black hair...so common...waiting on new chappies...
do ur best..
ya ne
There is a lot of guyz with black hair...so common...waiting on new chappies...
do ur best..
ya ne
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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I have a clue in who could be the rapist....but I could be wrong. :D Good fic so far. Can't wait to see the next update.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, black hair...doesn't narrow it down too much, does it...that cuts out what, Gaara? Well I guess Neji's hair is more brown...Shika's too...and Choji is out...The bug makes me think Shino, but his is more brown...please update soon.
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...black hair, that narrows it down to about half the village. ^-^
but because of that bug and now the black hair, my mind automatically went "Shino! How could you!?"
I love the story so far and can't wait for the next update.
but because of that bug and now the black hair, my mind automatically went "Shino! How could you!?"
I love the story so far and can't wait for the next update.
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Thanks for pointing out that mistake my fellow reveiwers! ^_^" How embarrising to make such a mistake. Ah, I'm getting old. -_-
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NICE! I LUV it, PLEASE continue.
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay... that was kind of cute at the end. i'm enjoying this story, though that whole chapter was in italics. i'm sure it was an accident or something, but anyway, it's not a big deal, just a little confusing for a few paragraphs until i realized you just didn't turn it off. good job, i can't wait to find out who did it!!~
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likey the new chappie. But uh almost the whole thing is in italics.