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by OceanBlue

person Lici
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huh....Odd.

NOt bad, but this is a first for me. Try to not let the emotions jumble up with the outside world too much, it will confuse prople(AKA: me). Otherwise, I await the nest chapter with bated breath....
person Stacy
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hummmmmmmmmm......I wonder who it is?? Please give us more hints!!
person llyoung
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Your story is interesting and I have enjoyed reading it.
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I know who it is. please update quickly
person emp78
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Isn't Naruto just asking for trouble at the end? lol.
BTW, is the rapist Shino? Because of the bug thing.
person Renachi
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...it's going to be tough to solve this one....give us more clues in the next chapter!!!>_<
person amyrose
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You need to update! I wanna see an update! I wanna read moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore ^^
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this is my first Naruto got raped and is going to have a baby fic, but I really like it. I think it was Sasuke 'cause of the string or it could be Sino *shudders*
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it you rushed it a bit but it's your first fic and it's a lot better then some storys i've seen. also I think shino shoud be the father because of the bug comment and because there need to be more shino/naruto pairings. not to mention the fact that shino is really quiet so maby shino has always had a crush on naruto but never knew ( is that how you spell it?? ) just how to tell him and this is what happened because of it.

So please please please let shino be the father and well if he is'ent the father can gaara be the father or if not him well anyones good as long as it's not sasuke because theres more then enough of that pairing. but in the end it's up to you but dear god please don't let it be sasuke anyone and I mean ANYONE is better then him I mean it coud be iruka or ino who ues'ed a jutsu to turn into a guy woud be better then sasuke.

Now I don't have anything against the sasuke/naruto pairing but it's been done so much it's geting annoying to read. but in the end like I said the pairings are up to you but please please please please please for the love of god don't let sasuke be the father.





person j_narusasu_c
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like the first chap, so cute... Who is the rapist? I hope he loves Naruto...