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for Square the circle

by sris

person jess
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhh! that was amazing! ^_^ they are so perfect together. and i liked that kakashi was a little in secure as well, you know? usually it's like he's on top of everything or just using iruka... but in your story their relationship was believable and sweet and wonderful! yay! not to mention the super hot amazing sex!!!! woot! hehe. so thank you so so so very much! you are awesome as was this fic! please write more, i love your style. *HUG* THNAK YOU! ^_^
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with them, I'm happy and I love them too! I'm glad they've worked it out - phew! And I can't believe Kakashi thought Iruka had a thing for Naruto, that never would've crossed my mind although you know, when you look at it from that point of view Iruka's relationship with Naruto can look a bit suspicious. Anyway, great chapter hehe!

Hina xXxx
person Hello
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, Kakashi was jealous of Naruto... he he.
person ALD
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I like the part on cynicism, very human. I wish, though, that Kakashi had looked a little worse for ware. Like he was suffering so much he couldn't hide it, just like Iruka. At least that would have given Iruka a little glimmer of hope. Hope you update soon.
person ALD
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so mad when Iruka started to kiss her back. Then I felt so sad for Kakashi, then Iruka. Good chapter though if you can get multiple feelings from the readers. Hopefully everything works out soon. I don't like a sad Kakashi, but I hate a sad Iruka. Update soon please. :)
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for Iruka - it's obvoius that he loves Kakashi, hopefully Kakashi will realise that as well and they'll have another go at it. Ofcourse Iruka had a point as well, when trust is broken it's a bit hard to patch the relationship back up... I think lol. Anyway, I like the way you displayed their emoyions, it was really well done.

Hina xXxx
person Silver4HENTAI
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update pretty please
person j.s
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its seems soo sad now....*cries*
i like how u slyly added in the title in da last paragraph...very clever
update soon..
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...oh no....nonono......I new it...I could already smell it in th air........and again I am pleading for an happy ending..^^
person Hello
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least Iruka isn't confused about his feelings for Kakashi. I hope Iruka will be able to convince him.