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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(ch10) I really liked this chapter and Iruka's thought process, the way he came to the realization about Kakashi and how much he wanted him and also how he still couldn't understand entirely what had happened with Hana. I especially liked the discription of trust being broken that was very insightful. We've all done stuff that we've had to come to grips with and work out for ourselves and I thought the way you showed that was very realistic and well done.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww, poor Iruka:( I loved it!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had three or so chapters to catch up on--oh my! Some good sex there! But how sad--it doesn't seem to be working! What a sand end to "Falling"--I hope it works out--are you really going to start the New Year with a sad ending??
But even though it was sad, it was good--thanks for the update!
But even though it was sad, it was good--thanks for the update!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh!!! That was so AWFUL!!! OOps sorry I LOVE the story, but the ending to ch.9 was so sad!!!
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Okay, time for some constructive criticism...
I have noticed a lot of grammar and spelling errors. The story would be perfect if it weren't for those.
You might be interested in getting a beta.
Well, I like the story a lot, so I'll keep on reading.
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Okay, time for some constructive criticism...
I have noticed a lot of grammar and spelling errors. The story would be perfect if it weren't for those.
You might be interested in getting a beta.
Well, I like the story a lot, so I'll keep on reading.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Iruka. I guess he kissed her since he's been not getting enough attention form Kakashi lately. Some people do seek for comfort from those they do not have 'intimate' relations with. :p
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god - that hurt! Poor Kakashi - poor Iruka... the woman should learn to keep her hands to herself - (although Iruka is kind of hot so I can't blame her)and of course he didn't have to kiss her back... sigh. Oh well, what's done is done I guess. Nice one ^_^ can't wait for more.
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is always nice to read a KakaIru story. Your story has a sweetness to it that makes me just huddle up with a blanket and some warm jasmine tea and read.
By the way, I vote for a happy ending, please. Real life is hard enough.
By the way, I vote for a happy ending, please. Real life is hard enough.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I liked that =D but Iruka's right, Kakashi is gonna have to watch it with that kunai lol, he could aciidentally do some damage with that, especially when they're both lying in bed naked hehehe. Nice. ^_^
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, I wonder what's going to happen at the springs. Heh.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this sort of shy Kakashi and the bi-sexual Iruka. Unique but somehow still in character.
More~! XD
More~! XD