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for Square the circle

by sris

schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
everybody loves hot springs...but poor Kakashi...he's always getting interupted. XD Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...^^.....did you miss me......ohh...Naruto could have waited some minutes.....but they could also do some naughty stuff in the spring..*__*..looking forward to the next chapter....
person LYNN
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright ive been reading for a while now, and have been very unconsiderate for not reviewing. so im verryyy sorry, but im going to make up for it. i just wanted to point out that this is one of my favorite story lines currently. >>> PLUS YOUR THE FASTEST AUTHOR IVE EVER SEEN!!! Thank you so much for this story
person ALD
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait till the next chapter. I always love hot spring scenarios.
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just read all the chapters. My vote is for the happy ending (but perhaps an incident which causes us a bit of angst and worry to make it more interesting before you get to the happy ending, make Iruka worry a bit, make him realize that he REALLY wants to be with Kakashi).

I think the story itself is really fun to read, but there were quite a few typos (nothing a good reread and proofing wouldn't fix, just keep your eyes peeled for correct use of past tense, it seems to be one thing which winds its way into all chapters, and it's Gai not Guy). Not trying to be mean, I really like the fic and want it to be the best it can be. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Reily
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(ch7) Finally the chapter I'm sure most of us have been looking forward to and it was definitely delicious! I think a happy ending would be nice it seems that all the stories I've been finding and reading lately have been so angsty it's making me rather depressed, but whatever you feel is best for the story I'll read it no matter what.
person Velvetina
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for a happy ending... have to admit I'm addicted to them!! Hee! This was a very adorable chapter again... **Sigh** I know I've said it before but I adore these two. Kakashi does have a special niche in my heart especially. Hmm, though I am a little nervous. Why do I have a feeling theres going to be some angst to come?!
person Mademoiselle_LaCroix
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
..Finally they did it..^^...no I am waiting for a romanze.....^^...please more...
person j.s.
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! wen all da way ;)
excellent mwahahahahahaha
person Cindy
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, nice, nice~!