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for Square the circle

by sris

person Hello
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. I likey the action. :D
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a little slow . . .
person Hello
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, I wonder what will happen at Kakashi's place...
person Velvetina
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, thats so cute ^__^ and bless Iruka he just wants all those he loves by him. I have more to say but its late where I am so I need to sleep, but I just had to read and review!! :-)
person j.s.
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn tease...but its true...da more u wait da better it is or something like dat
keep up da gud work!
person Velvetina
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I for one love teasing so its all fine by me. And yay they are an official couple... well to themselves **Puts on party hat** It was a very cute chapter and I'm happy to see the lads together again!
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell, I wish I'd ha a New Year's eve like that - that was hot. If this is what's it's going to be like you can take it as slow as you like hehe

Hina xXxx
person kiwii-chan
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!you rock!!it's so awesome!!!i love this pairing^^
well, ust go ahead with the story^^
person Hestia
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks--hot stuff--love the line about how once you have sex you start craving it a lot--the new love phenomenon. The party was fun although I was hoping for a makeout scene in the bathroom!
Question--how can Iruka see a Kakashi nosebleed of 1 drop with his mask on? (Although I like the idea and Iruka's reaction to it!
person Reily
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was definitely a yummy chapter but poor Iruka it seems as soon as he resolves one problem he's faced with another one and more questions, can't wait to see what happens next!