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for Square the circle

by sris

person Reily
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I only just found this story and I read the whole thing in one sitting! I especially liked chapter 3 and no not just for the smut (although it was steamy) but because of Iruka's whole inner conversation he had with himself. I kind of wish though that we had gotten a little of Kakashi's thoughts about everything that had happened was he as worried as Iruka or was he a little more comfortable with what had happened. I also liked that you didn't have them fall into all out sex right away, let's give them at least a little time to figure out what's going on between them besides it gives us something to look forward to in the story!
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow - that was great, really great, I'm about to go over to the next chapter hehe. What can I say, I'm greeedy ^_^
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"was it really that bad?" he asks, well i agree with Iruka =D it was great.
person ShayBoo
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEL* OMG sooooooooooo hot. Please dont tell me thats the end!

person Velvetina
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
**Nods** Totally KakaIru all the way!! :-D And I bet you enjoyed writing it!!Heh. This is definetly a chapter where a person can identify with Iruka, which I think is crucial, as mean as it sounds its nice to see him worrying over whether it was a one night stand or more... and getting disturbed about Kakashi not telling him about the party. This is what people do worry about at the start of a relationship and its nice to actually see it included in a fic. Adds a whole new level to it and lets us relate to the character.

Looking foward to the next chappie!
person Hello
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, new reader. :p Like the story.
person Hestia
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice transition chapter. One correction needed however--Kakashi was a genin--I think you meant jounin or genius. I'm looking forward to the party scene! Thanks for the update!
person lo
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this first chapter. Nciely done.
person lo
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The second chapters was great too. This is really fun to read.
person j.s.
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn...i thought they were going to go all da way there...damn teases ;)
im impressed at ur updating speed keep it up!