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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh that was hot! Very, very hot! I love these two together. And Yay Iruka so the face behind the mask!!! I know he briefly saw Kakashi's face before but it wasn't the same. I really liked the way Iruka acted when the sex scene was on I though it was very IC, and his thoughts at the start too. Another wonderful chapter!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was great!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!! lol:P update soon please!!!!!!!^-^
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think when I wrote my last review I had read a disturbing non-con, so I was sensitive about Iruka getting aggressive. But rereading--it does seem more like drunk playfulness. Chapter 3 is awesome--I love Kakashi worried about Iruka thinking it wasn't good. I also like the reference to Iruka's teenage "stage" with men. I love how Iruka figures out Kakashi's problem with showing his interest. Also the idea of Kakashi not being very sexually active is appealling. I loved Iruka's self doubts as well. The sex scene on the movie was so funny. This really is a great chapter--I'll be rereading this one, I'm sure!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Its so cute, and Kakashi is my ultimate fave. That darned mask I know exactly how Iruka feels. I'm looking foward to the update
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems a little odd for Iruka to go from considerate about K's mask to rude so quickly. It's sort of odd that there is no mention of what Iruka thought either--or didn't he actually notice K's face after the kiss?
I really liked the line about Kaka "getting off" on upsetting Irka in Chap. 1.
I really liked the line about Kaka "getting off" on upsetting Irka in Chap. 1.
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want some more please